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Conversations in the low light: What happens when the captain's laundry follows you home and you're awake at an ungodly hour.

Thursday, March 9, 2006

Next Chapter to laundry- Conversations in the low light: What happens when the captain's laundry follows you home and you're awake at an ungodly hour. Again its M/I, but soon i will get to the plot and the other characters; afterall firefly just isn't the same with out the whole gang putting in their two cents.

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Conversations in the low light: What happens when the captain's laundry follows you home and you're awake at an ungodly hour.

Rating- PG I think

Disclaimer- Come on folks, like, as if we don't know! Repeat after me, Joss made them and him and some other rich folk own it all, not me.... I don't even own a good computer I own a crappy old laptop with a dial-up connection.

Special thanks to 2x2 who did me the favor of being my beta on this fanfic.... Thanks so much...

A/n- not sure if the format is kinda too jumbled for some of you to read clearly, if so let me know. Also, know this is totally going to be Mal / Inara, and its post the BDM. Oh, and before I go and forget... yes the rating will go up for violence, language, and some situations with

references to sex and maybe more but I doubt it will ever be NC-17... herm :cough cough... enough said. Lets get to the reading folks!

Inara sat, folding her freshly washed clothes. She was thinking about what had happened earlier today, about how quickly Mal and herself had turned to fighting; about how easy it should have been to just tease him instead of fighting about his lack of tact when it came to her. Was it really so hard for him to be civil with her, and for honesty's sake she had ask her self why it was so hard for her to keep civil with him as well; she could not place all the blame on him , but she sure knew he shared a great deal of it.

Why did she care so much? And why did their words always come out slightly twisted?

She supposed the easiest and most utterly idiotic way to explain it was to say it was just their way- Naturally that thought left her dissatisfied. She'd over-reacted, been too sensitive about the whole thing because the situation had truly been personal to her.

Then, suddenly, she came across one of his shirts, her stomach doing summersaults as she picked it out from the basket on the floor.

"Damn," was the only word she could utter as she looked at the beat-up burgundy shirt. She straightened it, buttoned

Comments
Thursday, 09 March 2006 04:44
I think i am going to name this the 'Something Personal' series, what do you all think? I just wanted to run it by you guys. I just thought it would fit since it's all so personal even the plot. Well in case you are all wondering the next chapter is called 'History: Karma is a five letter word a companion would never say, and the crew does not know each other as well as they think.' Its a work in progress so the tittle might chage a tad later, though it will begin and be history. Am i make'n any sense? probibly not i should go get some rest...
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 March 2006 05:48
"Something Person" sounds great. This was a wonderful start. Please continue writing.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 March 2006 05:49
I'm back- my bad!

New to the site and just found the rest of this fic!

Thursday, 09 March 2006 10:43
This is good. You can tell you had it beta'd, definitely a good idea.

'Something Personal' is a good series title.

Look forward to seeing more!
Thursday, 09 March 2006 14:02
Very nice! I like the image of Inara walking around in Mal's shirt (only it'd be better if it was me!)

It's good to see these two being nice to eachother for a change. I look forward to seeing where it goes!
Thursday, 09 March 2006 16:17
Liked it :)

Hope you'll continue, it's a good start, and it's cute how Inara said she loved the shirt and such :)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 March 2006 16:20
Aw she gets to keep the shirt. I like that red shirt; can't say i blame 'Nara for wanting it ;)

Looking forward to more :-D

Syzg

ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 March 2006 17:21
Coll glad you guys are reading i will post the next chapter as soon as i finish writing it... prolly 'bout a week if my computer doesn't go zombie of the blue screen on me
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 March 2006 17:21
oh right umm that up there was me heh
-oldsoul1987
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 March 2006 17:03
if she was so scared of being seen in mal's shirt why was she off her shuttle in it? I loved it though, not smutty (i get uncomfortable w/ smutty) this was sweet and... *warm fuzzies*
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 March 2006 22:03
I think this is coming along very well.
Mal+Inara=ALL THE LOVE
Monday, 17 April 2006 19:58
ha!! the terrible bra monster now has a brand new arch enemy - mal's shirt!!!

b

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