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Black rock Ops.: Intro -Inara

Thursday, July 6, 2006

Post BDM, WIP, I need a beta! Please let me know in your interested. I am planing to write each chapter in a slightly different style till i find one that suits me.

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**Do you recognize this man?

Oh Dear and merciful Buddha! Mal please be ok.

That is Malcom Reynolds. I rented a shuttle from him 5 years ago.

**Your records show you were abord his ship again two years ago.

Has it only been two years, I miss them so much

Yes, that is correct.

**Your bank records show you only once withdrew cash durring your month on his ship.

Well, sir. I only had to pay the man once.

**and you had no other expenses through out your trip?

of course i did you hwoodan! I with drew cash then exchanged the money with a contact to untraceable bills! If you ever catch them it will not be because of me, NEVER.

I had left behind many supplies the last time I stayed with them.

** I see. Miss. Serra are you aware that Mr. reynolds and those under his employ are wanted for questioning by the Alliance?

No, I never really socialized with them How stupid do you think I am?!

** When you left Mr. Reynolds ship for the first time you returned here to the guild?

Thats right

** I found a record in the guilds files that states you left the guild a few months after returning from Serenity. Why?

It's personal

**Where were you during this time?

Home

I wish i was there now

**Elaborate Miss. Serra, you own three privet locations on two different planets and your family has many more.

Oh Gosse My aunt's estate in beleraphon. Forgive me Aunt, your the only one i can still trust!

** I am sure you won't mind waiting for us to verify your story.

Actually Mr. Morris I do have business to atend to. But if their is anything else you would require of me you can reach me at my flat.

** I understand. I'll be in touch should we need any other information from you.

Certainly. Good day.

Please Mal be safe, please don't do anything stupid

Comments
Friday, 07 July 2006 02:39
Intriguing...I'll be interested to see where this goes.
Friday, 07 July 2006 09:03
I'll beta for you if you like.

I'm a half decent spelling/grammar checker and I'll try not to comment on your style whilst you're still making your mind up.

Send it my way, silvered.dagger@gmail.com

Lets see if we can get you out of the annoying habit of not finishing fics! (*winks*)

Saturday, 08 July 2006 06:59
While Tayeatra has offered her services, if ya want or need another POV on your fics, just drop me a line at z_wing@hotmail.com or general_iblis@yahoo.ca....always happy to help out a fellow Browncoat:D

And this is mighty interesting stuff you got here, OldSoul1987...makes me wonder why Inara's not on Serenity 2 years after the BDM. Mal screw up again, or did Inara just have another crisis of faith about loving Mal? Can't wait to find out;)

BEB
Saturday, 08 July 2006 18:56
Hello this is OLDSOUL1987 here.

Hey you all, first off THANKS! It's nice to get comments and so much help. I have the next part kinda ready, just sent it to tayeatra for betaing.

ALSO... i have big news. This is my new pen neam here cause the site wont let me sign in to my old one for some gorram reason. but itst cool. I am going to transfer some of my stuff to this new pen name, and once my new chapter is edited i will post it.

Thanks again to tayeatra for your help and to BEG for you offer i'll kepp it in mind.

And about the Inara thing. hahahaha (mine is an evil laugh) you have to read the next few chapters to see. Soon you will all hate my guts for giving such small bits of info at a time, with tons on angst.

Oh and some of you should know i found a style im comfy with. So NEXT chapters style is the one i'm sticking with.

right well adios.

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