Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Core of the Matter - Intro

Tuesday, February 28, 2006

Odd passengers set Mal's hackles up. The money was just too good. (Post-OiS Pre-BDM)

All this is borrowed from a genius whose name rhymes with Just Weedin'. I hope one day to be like him, except for the chubby, male and bald part. He rocks. Like a boat. If by some chance he wants to take this, it's all his and the honor entirely mine.

Dedicated to FollowMal who wanted something to read. Since she's got all the shiny Cap'n pics, I couldn't refuse.

This is my very first virginal attempt at fanfic, so please submit all comments to kaele@blowitoutyourbleep.com Or just e-mail me at my address listed under my profile.

Edited: 3/9/06
Beta: Curtis (THANK YOU!)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3526    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“You’re sure they’re going to pay in cash, not try and push Alliance credits on us?” The tread of boots echoed in the nearly empty cargo bay as Zoe walked up to the airlock and glanced over at the Captain. She shifted her weight, sizing up the three people standing just a short step off of their ship.

He didn’t turn to look at her, just kept a close eye on the three figures down at the bottom of the ramp. Those three could almost be related, all crisp lines and not a hair out of place. Definite Core fashion, uptight and serious.

“They do, they’re getting off.” Cold, quiet, Mal’s inflection made the short sentence the only insight she needed to know his opinion.

Zoe had been watching the small group herself as they said their goodbyes, but she cut her eyes over to the back of the Captain’s head at his comment. She knew their financial straights. It spoke enough of their situation that he had been convinced to come to a Core World to make this trip.

The past few months had been tight for the crew, and even she could tell Mal’s belt needed to be tightened by a notch. It made them all more than a little too eager for this transport job. The Captain had commented twice that it was just another pair of citizens, just another fare like all the rest. But that simple fact that he had repeated himself was all the impression that Zoe needed. Even her nagging conscience kept interrupting her train of thought; this simple ferry trip was paying much too well.

The trio in front of them split up, two walking toward the ship, one heading back towards the port annex.

“Captain Reynolds?” the man greeted him as they stepped onto the ramp. Must’ve been his suit buttoned up too tight that made him stand so straight.

Mal nodded and introduced Zoe, “My first mate.”

“I am John Sebastian and this is Ms. Elena Lien.” His traveling companion offered a confident but slightly cold smile, but did not step forward to offer her hand. “We believe you’ve received your deposit.”

And a hefty one it was t

Comments
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 06:52

Thank you Kaele! I give a 10 thus far and I can't wait to read more!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 14:19
Second piece of fan fiction that I have started to read. Much better than the first.
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 03:36
I'm hooked, Kaele. More, please!
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 11:41
Interesting start, I'll be following it to see how it pans out.
Thursday, 02 March 2006 13:49
Now that I've read it completely out of order...

To quote the illustrious Bugs Bunny..

"I like it... I LIKE it!!"
Thursday, 09 March 2006 20:27
I refuse to rate my own stuff.

Please re-read this as it was edited. Thanks so much to LEEH and Curtis.

All hail Curtis, my new Beta. :)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 March 2006 21:58
Very good start. Looking forward to reading the rest.
Thursday, 09 March 2006 22:00
Curse this need to login! BanzaiBill says "O-tay!".
Friday, 10 March 2006 03:37
D'oh. I knew I forgot to do something. Sorry :-)

Wonderful start. I've got you bookmarked so I can read what comes next, as nothing, but nothing, goes without a hitch for our BDH.
Friday, 10 March 2006 19:25
A good start, just need longer chapters *dong ma*? - Ali D :~)
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