Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Core of the Matter, Part 1

Wednesday, March 1, 2006

All this is borrowed from a genius whose name rhymes with Just Weedin'. I hope one day to be like him, except for the chubby, male and bald part. He rocks. Like a boat. If by some chance he wants to take this, it's all his and the honor entirely mine.

Edited: 3/9/06
Beta: Curtis

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3327    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Grease, coolant, and sometimes even burnt cabling were the usual smells around the ship. But this time something of an altogether different world seemed to float, permeating every nook and cranny. The kind of smell that stuck to the back of your throat and made you thirsty for more of it, only quenched when you could roll the taste over your tongue.

Mal liked that smell.

“Sure is good to have some fresh food for a change.” Kaylee sat down bowls of rice, fresh (fresh!) fried meat, and a few other sundries. The table hadn’t look so burdened for longer than most of the crew cared to think.

“Shiny,” Jayne managed to get out before his mouth was stuffed.

A small choking sound came from Kaylee’s direction, probably at the unexpected compliment. Coming from Jayne, that was high praise indeed for her cooking.

Three of their passengers were dressed for dinner, or as dressed as could be deep out in the black on board a cargo ship. Simon seemed less out of place here next to their two new passengers than usual. Forgoing chopsticks for forks and spoons, their new companions added to their plates much more sedately than the crew. Even Simon heaped his plate with more food than his usual decorum allowed. Good manners prevailing, their guests did not comment on their ravenous hosts.

“May I ask what it is you do, Mr. Sebastian?” Simon asked, voicing what was obviously on everyone’s mind.

Mal had noticed the deferential way in which Sebastian had been treating his companion. Mal had dealt with the man in negotiating this trip. Once on board the stiff-as-a-board man did the lifting and the carrying of all the luggage. Ms. Lien was in charge, no mistaking. Sebastian may have handed over the money for this excursion but Lien held the purse strings.

And as if his thoughts were being echoed in the conversation, Lien spoke up. “Actually, he works for me. My personal assistant.”

Got it in one, Mal thought. He shot Simon a withering glare to quiet him, but the boy must have either been oblivio

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 05:01
Excellent work. We need more!
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 05:14
Keep it up! Great stuff.
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 05:48
Very good Kaele. Keep it coming.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 06:44
I hope your happy...now I'm hooked. Keep posting if you don't want to be responsible for my fanfic withdrawl. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna do a line of filk.
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 11:12
Very Nice work. Go on with it!
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 20:29
More please? I gotta know howcome a BlueSun exec is travelling on Serenity. And how long it takes her to get a crush on Mal. Okay nevermind that last bit.
Thursday, 02 March 2006 03:24

I knew it, you're getting a fanfic club goin' here, girl.

Excellent... I am so curious now as to what is going to happen with our crew.

You know, you are gettin' good at this, you'll get us all spoiled and we'll be waitin' on your fics.

Thursday, 02 March 2006 13:41
Ok, that was a mighty fine appetizer!

I'm not leaving this table until I get my second course. Go, on try and move me.
I'm heavier than I look ;)
Thursday, 09 March 2006 22:04
Very nice finish. I do LOVE the cliffhangers!

So - how long until River decides she looks better in red? I know, I know - gotta read the next one.

Monday, 13 March 2006 01:36
** For the edited version **
I like it. The new and improved version obviously takes a bit from the old Part 2.

I think it flows better now, and is more self contained. Very nice! Looking forward to the revamped parts 2 & 3.

Keep up the nice work - its an enjoyable read.
Friday, 14 April 2006 20:40
BLUE SUN?!? whoo, boy...

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