Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Going On (1/?)

Monday, February 27, 2006

When the operative left Mal, he asked him how he had gone on after Serenity Valley. Now, he gets his answer.(1/?)

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AN-before you ask, no, there is no beta reader, as I'm working out of a public library. Oh, and please comment, a'ight?

***

The operative looked coldly down at Mal, his pistol pointing at his forehead. Billy's blood was still on Mals cheek, a handprint like the one Book had given him as he lay dying on Haven.

Mal looked at the boys body, a hole in his chest, blood still seeping out of the boy. Near him, Jayne and Zoe sat in the mule, which lay against a tree on the heavily wooded path. River lay groaning a few feet from him.

Mal was on his knees, facing this new operative. He was white skinned, and no glasses or sword. But he was still as cold, mercilous, and as much a murderer as the other man.

"He was just a kid," said Mal.

"No," said the new operative. "He was an obstacle in my way."

Mal closed his eyes, and waited for death to come in and take him.

"Sweet dreams of oblivion, Malcolm Reynalds."

***

Mal looked warily at the ratty faced man. "So, wait, let me get this straight. You want us to go to the ass end of the 'verse, to look into a guy who jus' might have an offer for you?"

Mark Chang shook his head, looking all kinds of nervous. "No, no, Mal, you miss the point. I want you to look around, get a few contacts, search this guy out, look into whoever knows about him, see if I can trust him."

"So you say. Whats this place called again?"

"Its a new settlement, on a moon called Ptah."

Mal would have never trusted folk like Chang before Miranda. A new guy with more money than was good for him, he was looking to get a cut of others profits a mite quickly, which usually ended in someone getting a bad case of the deads, usually the guys like Mal an'co. 'Course, before Miranda, he had a rep that weren't the victim of Alliance mud-slinging. Now, he was lucky to get any work at all, as most of his old contacts were either dead or in hiding, which brought no end to trouble down on their preety lil' heads. He was of a mind to argue, but the l

Comments
Monday, 27 February 2006 23:04
As I said, please comment. And I know its short, but I'm a bit pressed for time here. Shiny!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 February 2006 23:18
it was good. i liked the flashbacks. it should be fun to see how mal gets into his operative predicament.keep it up!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 00:18
>"Say, it look like hes walkin' funny to you?"

>"Probably. 'Mount ya two go at it, I'd say hes havin' trouble pissin' by now. Y'know, burnin' sensations, an' the like."


ROTFL! Oh, now that was funny.
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 14:15
Thanks!!! I 'preciate it. Next should be posted later today.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 16:53
Good story. Poor simon the torch Kaylee was carrying is sure to burn him up now that she's got him
Friday, 10 March 2006 19:07
A bit confusing until I realised you were switching back and forth with the flashbacks. Just how many operatives are there, gorrammit? And do every one of them want to skin Mal? Shiny. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 01 May 2006 12:28
I like it. Dark and cute at the same time. Very good.

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