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Saturday, February 25, 2006

What happened between Inara and Fess. Heavy heavy Nc-17

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2823    RATING: 4.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Fess Higgins couldn’t believe the beauty that stood before him. The beauty that his father had bought for his first time, but still, all his.

Inara slid her dress to her waist and Fess stared at the sight of her gorgeous tits practically spilling out of a white, lacy corset. She dropped her skirts, revealing a matching thong that quickly joined the pool of silk on the floor. She smiled as she saw the bulge in his pants.

She dropped to her hands and knees and seductively crawled over to the young boy, who was seated on the couch. She put her hands on his legs and looked into his eyes, finding pure lust there. It turned her on to have this kind of effect on somebody. She laid her elegant hand directly over his crotch, her fingers expertly searching out the outline of his penis.

“Jesus!” In an electric reaction, he tried to sit up, but was stopped by her gentle hand on his chest.

“I think you’ll enjoy this more if you lay still,” Inara murmured, as she unzipped his pants. His cock was limp with shock, curled on a broad mat of blond hair. Inara took a long breath of delight, then wrapped her lips around him. She loved it like this, all soft and small. This way she could get every bit of it into her mouth with ease and hold it there, not even tonguing it yet, just feeling it grow and grow in her wet warmth.

Fess was recovering from his surprise, his cock beginning to twitch and grow. She cupped his balls with her hand, her middle finger stealthily sliding and pressing upward along the taut skin of his scrotum. Now her lips and tongue were working together around Fess’ almost erect penis. His size surprised her.

“Inara,” he gasped, “That feels amazing.”

“Mmmm,” was all she said.

As he grew longer and thicker in her mouth, she shifted her mouth slightly and worked only on the tip, treating it with a strong, unfaltering suction while her right hand slid up and down his shaft and her left fondled his balls. He groaned as he felt himself getting closer and closer to orgasm.

Pul

Comments
Saturday, 25 February 2006 05:02
I understand this was simply smut w/o much plot. I still would have liked to think that their union was a bit less . . .um . . .you know . . .bow chicka wow wow.
Saturday, 25 February 2006 05:04
Good writing anyway . . . maybe you could whip out a fic with a lower rating . .. maybe pg-13. I like your writing style, and would enjoy a good adventure or comedy.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 25 February 2006 05:07
Inara was very incredibly out of character. She's a far more elegant lady than portrayed here.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 25 February 2006 05:20
Don't let the "out of character" complaints get you down - I think it was fine, all things considered. Next time you have it in your mind to do a fic with a full-grown male virgin, gimme a wave. - WildHeavenFarm
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 25 February 2006 05:51
Umm...gross? Post this on a porn forum, not here. Inara seems very out of character
Saturday, 25 February 2006 06:28
Uh, yeah.
Totally out of character, I think, for both Fess and Inara. I didn't even finish it, just scanned it. You might consider getting a good beta who can help you actually write in the firefly 'verse and not where-ever this is supposed to be.
DIMMAL
Saturday, 04 March 2006 20:48
I liked Fess. I like that there is a story about Fess. Thank you. Dim-Mal.
DIMMAL
Saturday, 04 March 2006 20:49
I clicked post before I finished. just wanted to add that it may have been more enjoyable if it was alittle less.... course.

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