“Besides,” Inara said, gazing at him with a slight grin. “Why would I want to leave Serenity?”
Mal smiled back and mused over the question for a moment.
“Can’t think of a reason.”
* * *
Minutes later they stumbled into Inara’s shuttle, kissing passionately. Their tongues intertwined and massaged each other. Mal moved down her face, continuing his kisses down to her neck and started to nibble and suck at the tender spot he found there.
He moved the straps of her dress off her shoulders and pulled her breasts out over her bra. Hungrily, he suckled at her pert nipples. They were quarter sized, pink, and perfect. Suddenly, he realized just what he was doing and who he was doing it too. He pulled away and looked up at Inara.
“This is crazy.”
She met his gaze with lust filled eyes. “I know. Just please don’t stop. I need you Mal.”
He continued his ministrations, licking and sucking. “I’ve wanted you for so long Inara.”
“Take me Mal.”
Hearing her say that banished any doubt he might have had, leaving raw lust for this beautiful woman.
Mal pushed her to the wall of her shuttle and fell to his knees in front of her. Running his hands up her sexy legs, he lifted her up her skirt. Filled with passion, he ripped off her panties and lifted her right leg over his shoulder. Licking and kissing along her thigh, he made his way to her glistening slit. He slid two fingers in first, probing and massaging her pussy. Inara rolled her head back and whimpered at his touch. “Oh fuck yes…tianna…oh Mal don’t teased me…”
Mal took his fingers out and touched her lips with them. She sucked on his fingers and her own juices greedily. Smiling, he knelt back down and licked at her glistening lips. Caressing her hips, he worked his tongue in and out of her rapidly, then latched onto her clit with his mouth. He nibbled and sucked on the velvet bud of her passion, delighting in her moans. He slid his fingers back into her, curving them to hit her G-spot. Her head was thrashing back and forth and she leaned against the
Now, it isn't perfect, not by any means, but it's improved since your last foray into the fandom. I think it's got enromous potential. Keep it up, keep working with it! Maybe write some Simon/Kaylee smut to please us diehard Silee fans! ;)
Keep up the writing! Practice makes perfect!
Definitely coming along with infusing a more adult spin (even more than it already had, natch) into the 'Verse...but things still seem a tad too porn spoof. Maybe a bit more hesitaiton before the actual action could sell things better....
Still...while some people find smut their anti-bag, I think that this is a good effort in trying to unite to seemingly disparate elements;D
BEB
For example,
<<Running his hands up her sexy legs, he lifted her up her skirt.>>
So Inara has sexy legs. Why are they sexy? Are they long and lithe, etc...? What's so special about Inara's legs that Mal finds them so sexy?
And <<Filled with passion, he ripped off her panties...>>
Put us in Mal's head. What is he thinking? Simply writing that Mal is "filled with passion" doesn't go far enough. Describe this passion!
Good luck and keep writing.
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