Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Dark and Dirty-Capter 2: Mal and Inara

Saturday, February 11, 2006

More graphic sex and smuttyness. A hard NC-17.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3805    RATING: 2.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Mal tried not to let the sound of his breath catching in his throat be noticeable as he stared at Inara when she opened the door to her shuttle. She was wearing a long, white silk robe, with a smooth, stocking-covered leg bent out through the long slit up it. Inara looked at him and arched her eyebrow sexily, then turned away and walked into the shuttle. Mal followed, closing the door behind him. He took a seat, and she stood with her back to him.

She turned, giving him a smile, and then pulled her robe off in a single motion. It dropped in a pool around her feet to reveal her standing in a tight fitting white lace corset, the suspenders running down to white stockings, framing the smooth lips of her pussy beautifully. Mal took in the sight in front of him, her curves hugged tightly by the lace, her large breasts pushed up on her chest. Inara walked slowly towards him, smiling as she saw his stare. She sank to her knees in front of him and her fingers found his zipper, feeling his hard cock straining inside his trousers. Inara quickly slid the zip down and undid the button to free him, pulling his cock free and taking a grip around the base. She gave it a few slow jerks and then dove in and closed her plump lips around the head, hearing Mal groan as she slid the tongue around it.

"Would you like a titfuck?" Inara moaned, licking up and down his cock and jerking him slowly, sucking at his head with her full lips. Mal groaned as she worked on him, her experience evident as she licked his cock.

"I'd rather give you a proper fucking" Mal almost growled, gripping the couch.

"Yeah," Inara said, popping the cock back into her mouth for a second, "and what makes you think you deserve to fuck me?". She slipped off his cock and turned away with a smirk. Mal lunged forwards and pushed Inara down onto the bed her front. He got down behind her, kneeling between her splayed legs and pinned her shoulders down just as she went to get up, meaning she got onto her knees but not her hands. Ma

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 11 February 2006 06:10
Figures this one is just as OOC as the last one, not to mention completely terribly written, not at all tastefully.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 11 February 2006 06:47
This is horrible. Why???
Saturday, 11 February 2006 13:49
JMO, it's waaaaaaaaay out of character. Nothing resembles the characters, except their names. You made Inara a whore, not a companion.

ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 11 February 2006 20:48
I agree, this does not belong here.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 February 2006 16:48
This here's the difference between erotica, which explores the characters through sex and stimulates the brain, and porn, which is about buzzwords and stimulating a physical reaction from the reader rather than a mental.

(This here: porn.)

But to say it has no place here is a little harsh. I've seen bad fluff that is just as out of character.

Though you might be getting better reviews in a place like literotica, where people are actually looking for porn.
Sunday, 12 February 2006 16:49
That last one was me. For some reason it spontaneously logged me out.
Monday, 13 February 2006 15:10
While everyone else hangs you, I would like to offer one piece of advice - exposition. PWP is one of mankind's greatest inventions, to my way of thinking, but you need to set the scene and have a little lead-in. Think of a porno movie - the lead-in may only be *ding dong* "Oh the pizza guy's here, but I can't find my money." Click on my username, then in the lower right of the next screen, click on "View all my blue sun items". About half of that is pwp (and about half of *that* is slash).

And to everyone who's picking this guy to death like ravens, he did say "porn" at the front of it, not "erotica" or "tender love story worthy of the ages". Just "porn". And hey, maybe Inara likes the chance to be a dirty girl once in a while, instead of so stoic and proper. Loving sex loudly and using cuss words doesn't make you a whore.
Monday, 13 February 2006 15:37
Hot sex <G>, but I've seen Morena up close and personal twice (clothed!) and she has small breasts.



Vera
Thursday, 15 September 2011 01:44
This was the worst thing I've ever read. Honestly! No class whatsoever, badly written. You made Inara a whore, when she's a companion.
Ugh.

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