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Crescendo

Monday, February 20, 2006

Kaylee falls victim to more of Simon's ministrations. Part four of Tesion, Touch Me Trust Me, and Prelude. Simon/Kaylee (NC17)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3595    RATING: 10.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: I do not own Firefly, it belongs to Joss Whedon.

Part four in a smut series of mine. Check out my profile for the first three parts titled: 1. Tension, 2. Touch Me, Trust Me and 3. Prelude

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"Tell me that you want this, Kaylee," Simon said softly.

Kaylee whimpered as his silky tone slipped over her. She was so relaxed, so ready that she wasn’t sure she could form the words he’d asked of her. But she knew she needed to. She had grown accustomed to his bedside manner, so to speak, and she knew that he was only asking it of her because he only wanted her to be happy, only wanted to do it if she wanted it too. Though she was sure her physical responses to his ministrations spoke volumes, she knew that Simon just wanted to be sure.

“I want this, Simon,” she replied, meeting his incredible, periwinkle-blue eyes. “Please…”

Simon smiled softly, nodding lightly. He leaned in slowly and pressed his lips to Kaylee’s, his eyes fluttering closed as he felt the heat from her mouth seep into him. He could feel her trembling beneath him, vibrating with passion and need. He kissed her deeply for a few long moments, his hands delicately fluttering over the flesh of her sides. He pulled away from her, his lips tingling, tasting her, and exhaled. His eyes fluttered open and drank in the sight of her, her flushed body beneath him, warm and ready.

The young doctor slowly slipped down Kaylee’s body once more. He knew she wanted to feel him inside of her, hell, he wanted to be inside of her too, but he wasn’t through yet. He needed to taste her, to see just how ready she really was for him.

Simon left a trail of kisses from Kaylee’s lips, down along her throat, over her collarbone, across her chest, over her breasts, along her ribcage and down over her belly. He stopped at her navel for just a moment to tease at it with his tongue, trailing it around the rim, dipping in, eliciting a gasp and moan from Kaylee.

He continued

Comments
Monday, 20 February 2006 21:08
Already commented on this on LJ, but...holy GUH, this is SO good.
Monday, 20 February 2006 21:10
I think I like this piece actually, which is great, cause it's encouraging me to write even hotter pieces!
Monday, 20 February 2006 21:43
You didn't put that this was the continuation of a few of your other fics....It is, isn't it?

This was tantizingly hot...and if writing it has encouraged you to write even hotter pieces....whoo hoo!

I needed to step away from the computer after reading this and go pant softly in the corner...I'm not sure you could write anything hotter! This was pretty darn hot...
Monday, 20 February 2006 21:45
Yes, I forgot to put that it's a continuation, thanks!

Oh, remember how we were talking about the next thing I'm going to write, with Kaylee and her toy..? Trust me, it'll be even hotter than this one.

*grin*
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 February 2006 22:30
Whew. I still think you're trying to kill me. Seriously, I think my pulse just doubled.

ManicGiraffe
JESSCLIFTON
Monday, 20 February 2006 23:37
Holy crap this series is so awesome!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 00:48
"Every so often the passion would get so great, the sensations so intense, that she would be forced to close her eyes, but only for a second."

I think that pretty much says it all... man that was AMAZING!
~ misskitten
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 01:44
Well I'm please to see you all like the story!

I'll have more up soon!
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 11:58
It sounded like a prayer, like a chorus of angels on high.

Very poetical, nice
Friday, 23 June 2006 16:58
The different adjectives (periwinkle, cobalt, etc) for Simon's eyes are great.

The tension/teasing is pretty intense too.

I don't think GUH or 'I'll be in my bunk' would do this piece justice.

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