Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Cruel Summer (Chapter 1)

Thursday, July 27, 2006

After the BDM, the crew decide they need some quiet time and go to visit Kaylee’s family on Harvest. Kaylee shows Simon that there’s more to life outside Serenity’s walls than he could ever have thought. Simon/Kaylee. (PG)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3748    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Firefly and all related articles belong to Joss Whedon.

Thanks to Yanlei and FrellingBlonde for the beta! Translations are at the bottom of the page!

First part of what looks to be a 13 part fic. All fluff (with maybe a touch of angst or not-so-fluff) ahead!


Chapter 1: Harvest Moon


It had been a long few weeks since Miranda, since the happenings that followed and since saying goodbye to three beloved men, but the crew was slowly moving on. They were flying again, this time without fear of reprisal for carrying two wanted citizens. After the whole incident they’d escaped from, the Alliance’s interest in Simon and River tapered off completely. Law force flags and bulletins disappeared off the cortex; the siblings could walk down the streets of a busy Allied world, right under the noses of the feds, and not be bothered. Things were finally gaining a semblance of normality.

Serenity’s crew members were healing slowly. Simon was recovering from the shot to the stomach he’d taken, the captain’s many wounds were healing with each passing day and the rest of the crew were moving on with few ill effects. They were traveling light, River at the helm, taking Wash’s place on the crew but nowhere near taking his place in everyone’s hearts. Yes, things were regaining their usual momentum.

Mal had been doing a lot of thinking since Miranda. He’d thought about Simon, almost losing his life while trying to help his crew. He’d thought about River, her bravery and unwavering loyalty, thought about how wrong he’d been to ever doubt her. He’d thought about Kaylee, who’d taken up arms to join the fight for their lives and for what was right. Mal had considered Inara, and she still confounded him after all his consideration, but he was beginning to admit that he didn’t mind it so much. He’d thought about Zoe, about how much stronger she was than he’d ever really given her credit for, especially since Wash. Mal had thought about Jayne, abo

Comments
Thursday, 27 July 2006 05:53
*grinning like a moonbrain from the cuteness*

I am so excited about this fic, from what you've told me it's gonna be so shiny. And it's off to a TRULY shiny start! Love it!
Thursday, 27 July 2006 15:08
Great stuff, I like the S/K...
Thursday, 27 July 2006 15:12
This is great - so sweet and loving ... I absolutely adore the idea of the two of them taking time with each other.

Of course, the build-up to that last night on Harvest is probably gonna kill me from anticipation, but somehow I'll make it. This is a greaet start ... post the next part soon!
Thursday, 27 July 2006 15:22
Suspending my disbelief that Kaylee (being the sexual woman that she is) wouldn't throw him down and have her way with him the moment he was healed, this was very sweet and romantic.

One hopes there will be a payoff at the end of 11 days (and weeks since Miranda!) of waiting.

Looking forward to reading what the next 11 days will hold for them.
Thursday, 27 July 2006 15:47
Thank you all for your compliments! Don't worry, I've got my muse back and hopefully I'll be able to write quicker than usual!

As for Kaylee not throwing Simon down and having her way with him, well, that's one opinion, mine differs. I wasn't originally going to write a final NC17 chapter, but now because of that difference in opinion I'm going to have to. The last chapter should please those who think there should be sex. Until then it's fluff and a touch of angst all the way.

In any case, I still hope you're all pleased with the upcoming chapters, they should be up soon!
Thursday, 27 July 2006 19:21
Its wonderful meimei. You heard how amsued parts of it made me last night. Its adorable and I cant wait to read more ^_^
Friday, 28 July 2006 11:25
As for Kaylee not throwing Simon down and having her way with him, well, that's one opinion, mine differs. I wasn't originally going to write a final NC17 chapter, but now because of that difference in opinion I'm going to have to.
-I just want you to know that you are not alone in that opinion, and that if you don't want to write the NC17 scene, you shouldn't, because after all, it is _your_ story.

He remembered Wash, his talent, his spirit. He remembered the Shepherd, with his wisdom and his secrets, and he’d remembered Mr. Universe with his love bot.
-It made me laugh to think that Mal thought of very deep things when remembering Book and Wash and the lovebot when remembering Mr. Universe.

They had decided to take it slowly.
-AMEN to that whole gorram paragraph.

There was just something about proving her mother wrong that gave her a sort of childish sense of satisfaction.
-HEHEHEHEHE I loved this.

I can identify with the ladder issue, I was that way myownself before I started working in the theatre, building sets and hanging lights. It's no longer an issue, thanks to that.

I love this little fluffy story, and look forward to reading it. As is probably obvious by the comments above, I share your opinion on Simon and Kaylee, and I am glad to see a story that is more in tune with that.
Friday, 28 July 2006 15:49
Thank you for the lovely review, RiverIsMyGoddess!

It's good to see that you're enjoying the story! For the first time in my life I was worried about posting something, this, and seeing that people do like it is definitely encouraging me to continue on with the series!

I certainly hope the next chapter can be as good as this one! I'll have it up soon, I'm half done writing it. :)

Thanks again for reviewing!
Saturday, 29 July 2006 07:13
Ah...another view of a wondeful fic;)

Loving what you got here so far. Must say it's a refreshing look at Silee where things are going slowly cuz of recovering injuries and feeling out this new relationship. Nothing wrong with wall-to-wall macking and sexing between these two crazy kids..but it's nice to get a slow one occasionally;)

BEB
Saturday, 29 July 2006 15:00
This is possibly the most romantic thing I've ever read.
Saturday, 29 July 2006 16:00
The next chapter will possibly be even more romantic than this one! :)

ETA for that is tomorrow, since I discovered I have a LOT more to do today than I had originally planned.

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