Anticipation
Sunday, July 30, 2006
Simon is feeling dominating and decides that it's Kaylee's turn to sumbit. Simon/Kaylee. (HARD NC17)
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 5272 RATING: 9.0 (NC17) SERIES: FIREFLY
Disclaimer: Firefly and all related elements belong to Joss Whedon.
Simon is feeling dominating and decides that it's Kaylee's turn to submit. Simon/Kaylee of course!
WARNING: This is a fanfic written for livejournal's 50kinkyways challenge. It is rated with a HARD NC17. If you are under the aforementioned age, offended by D/S kink or adult toys, or free sexuality in any way, PLEASE refrain from reading. If you do decide to read and find that it's not to your taste, please do not leave word commenting on the subject matter and that it is offensive. In all fairness, you have been warned. I'd like to get reviews on characterization and things like that, not on subject matter. Please try to remain objective, we're all mature people here so lets stay that way and refrain from flaming.
All in all: if you're squicked, turn back now. If not, read on and enjoy!
Thanks to the wonderful FrellingBlonde for the beta! This one goes out to those who are going to miss smut in the next 12 chapters of my fluffy series.
Translations at the bottom of the page!
Anticipation
Kaylee moaned softly as consciousness bombarded her. Her eyes remained shut as a pleasant warmth spread through her body. She yawned lightly and nuzzled further into Simon’s neck. His arms were draped around her and despite the fact that she was awake, she was far too comfortable to want to move just yet. Besides, it was still early.
Arching her hips a little, Kaylee groaned deep in her throat. She and Simon had fallen asleep after several bouts of passionate, frantic, hard sex the night before. He was still inside of her, she realized as she moved a bit, and she didn’t want to feel empty so she pushed her hips more firmly into Simon, her leg draped over his thigh, pushing him deeper. She was sore from all of the rutting, but at the same time she was happier than she could ever recall being.
Sighing happily she tried to fall back asleep. It was difficult considering the fact that Si
This may be MORE than adequate to make up for the lack of intimacy in your series but I'd still like to see some at the end of it! Yeah, I'm greedy. So? :)
Anyway, back to this. . . Guh?!
There's just something about a cool and collected and dominating Simon that is just damn hot. Maybe because we didn't get to see much of it in the series, I dunno.
Anyway, nice job with this. It was certainly hot, sexy and kinky!
Anyway, thanks for leaving a review! I'll try to get my second chapter of Cruel Summer up today!
Still looking forward to more cute fluffiness in your series, too!
Here's a thought - why would Kaylee have a strap-on as opposed to just a dildo? Well, I know *why*, the question is "with who?". Zoe, Inara, River, or could it be one of the menfolk? Bwahahahaha!
Thanks for reviewing, WHF! I've been a fan of your work for quite some time, and it's inspired a few of my own fics. :) I'm glad you liked it! There's going to be more Dom!Simon and other porn to come!
And you too, FB, thanks for reviewing! ;) Glad you like it more by the read!
And I can promise you now there will be more Dom!Simon and Kaylee hotness coming along eventually! :D
Glad you liked it!
“Not now, baobei,” Simon hushed her. “I just want you to go and do the work you need to do. You are going to wear that until I take it out, dong ma. You’ll be a good girl, won’t you?”
-Very, very hot stuff here doll.
he pressed it firmly over her sex
-Maybe I have said this to you, maybe not, but that use of the word sex really doesn't work for me at all.
Kaylee felt like she was on the verge of death by pleasure.
-What a way to go, though.
he’d pass the time by rearranging his entire med stock. It was completely unnecessary, but there wasn’t anything else for him to be doing
-I do that same thing with my kitchen, especially if I am nervous about something
I, for one, think that Kaylee will be hurting a lot from leaving that thing in all day, but maybe I just don't know any womenwho can stand that sort of thing.
before ya sex me
-This one is tolerable, but only because Jayne uses it as such in Heart of Gold, and anyone thinking like Jayne, especially Kaylee, is a good thing.
“Bi zui, Simon,” Kaylee moaned. “Just fuck me…”
-Ummmm, GGUUHH!
You used the word wanton a lot in this one. Seemed like a lot, at least to me.
I am really liking dominant Simon, very much a heart(and other body parts)felt GUH for this piece.
In such a long fic, I can't help but be somewhat redundant (with the word "wanton" and such), and if I didn't hurry the orgasms a little, I would have made it WAY too long.
As for the "he pressed it firmly over her sex" line, it's again with the redundance. I can only call it so many other things so many times. ;)
Even with all those elements, I still hope it was a completely overly enjoyable read for you! :) Next time I write something like this I'll definitely take these comments into consideration!
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