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Code of Honor (2/?)

Monday, February 20, 2006

Mal/River.
The countdown to River's 18th birthday begins. Jayne gets hit and threatened. **Has point of view changes between Mal and River with no warning.**

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2923    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: The quest had pitfalls and numerous perils – Part 1

Series: Code of Honor (8/?)

Author: Gwenfrewi72

Rating: AO

Fandom: Firefly

Spoilers: None

Summary: The countdown to River's 18th birthday begins. Jayne gets hit and threatened.

Length: according to Word 892

Disclaimer: The great, almighty and powerful Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, etc. own the universe and characters. I'm just playing with them. Please don’t’ take away my shiny toys Captain.

Author's Note: For miss_strawberry & obsidianagirl for encouraging my writing.

Copyright (c) February 2006 Patricia Flynn

Thanks to Obsidianagirl for beta-ing this for me. She’s the best in the ‘verse next to Mal, of course!

As always, feedback is shiny!

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Thirteen Days ‘til River’s 18th Birthday

I planned to keep things goin’ pretty much the way they’d been. Now’t we’d gotten Simon’s okay, I figured I could start in on the kissin’ real soon.

My lil’ albatross apparently had other plans. Breakfast that mornin’ was a might easier as I didn’t have to worry about playin’ the gentleman with Zoe and Kaylee anymore. I’d noticed given Zoe some of my undivided attention had helped so Ill try an’ make more of an effort to spend some time with her.

So when we were sittin’, her by my side as was my want when I’d escorted a lady in, I was surprised when I felt her hand and fingers twine into mine as it sat on the table. I glanced swiftly at Simon. He hadn’t noticed us, so wrapped was he in Kaylee as he was, so I quickly slipped our joined hands down into my lap.

Zoe caught my eye; her body tense, ready to move at a moments notice. Her eyes flickered to Simon and then back to me, a question in her eyes. I gave her an imperceptible nod and she visibly relaxed. One eyebrow rose in amusement before she returned her attention back to her breakfast.

But apparently that wasn’t enough for River, what she did later, well it even shocked the gorram hell out o’ me for a moment.

Sometimes I feel like I’m adrift wit

Comments
Monday, 20 February 2006 08:20
wow, i was slightly confued at one stage.. were there two different minds in the passage??? cause if there was that is really interestin.. and its really brilliant! i loved it
Monday, 20 February 2006 12:37
Loved this though switching points of view without warning was disorientating. Loved how Simon hit Jayne then River put her foot on his neck, the siblings for once acting in concert over the Mal/River pairing though undoubtedly for different reasons and I absolutely adored the calm way River headed Inara off before she could try to poison things and get another crack at the Captain herself. Oh yeah, shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 20 February 2006 16:22
Amdobell and fire2thefly,
Yeah the point of you switching is a little disorientating. Sorry about the confusion. I'll go put a little notice up top so people will be aware that it's gonna happen.
Monday, 20 February 2006 22:17
Really good. I loved the slightly darker side to Inara, it really works. She didn't have to say anything and wasn't able to manipulate the situation which I could see her doing. Excellent!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 05:43
Burnandboil

Thanks so much for the feedback.

I've always felt that Inara had a darker side that never got shown. I mean really, Companions are just manipulators when you get right down to it and they use sex to do a lot of the manipulation.
Friday, 24 March 2006 23:06
*whoop* go river! go river!

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ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 26 March 2006 18:49
Go River:) I love that girl. She rules.
Samantha

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