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Ticket 2/4

Saturday, June 9, 2007

Post BDM. Mal has another dream and gets a weird hunch.

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Ticket 2/4

Word Count: 504 per Word

Rating: PG-13 – mention of oral sex.

Summary: Post BDM. Mal has another dream and gets a weird hunch.

Disclaimer: The great, almighty and powerful Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, etc. own the universe and characters. I'm just playing with them. Please don’t’ take away my shiny toys Captain.

Author’s Note: Special thanks goes to luxuria_oceanus who helped inspire this story. Dedicated to TamSibling, Amdobell and BlueEyedBrigadier over on Fireflyfans.net’s Blue Sun Room, who requested that I continue this story. Be careful what you wish for!!!

Copyright (c) June 2007 Patricia Flynn

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The past three nights had been rough on Mal. The reoccurring dream of River being naked and painted with the symbols for “Ticket to the Special Hell” had stalked him while he slept.

Tonight, however, he was determined to sleep undisturbed by the visions of River’s lithe, naked body beckoning to him. To that end, he’d had a few shots before coming to bed.

As Mal drifted off to sleep, down in the passenger dorms River grinned slyly. It was time to up the ante with Mal.

River curled into a ball and went to sleep.

Mal awoke several hours later, aching for release.

This time the dream had progressed further than River declaring herself as His Ticket.

She had floated across the cargo bay to stand before him. Falling to her knees, she had opened his pants and taken his cock in her mouth.

With exuberance, she had brought him to the edge of orgasm over and over again, and just when he thought she’d finally let him climax, he was wakened by his alarm.

It was time to meet with the crew to go over the plan for today’s job and there was no time for him to “handle” his body’s current need for release.

Squelching his desire, he splashed his face, dressed and headed to the kitchen. There he found the crew seated around the table eating breakfast.

Taking his seat, Kaylee, whose turn it was to cook, placed a cup of c

Comments
Saturday, 09 June 2007 09:17
Excellent, so happy you decided to keep going and make this a four-part story. I laughed out loud when River mentioned the ticket then made it sound as if it was all to do with the plane. Made me chuckle Mal almost suspecting her of being responsible for his erotic dreams. The mentions of things yet to come at the end kind of ruins the surprise. You don't need to do that to keep us reading, just keep writing! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 09 June 2007 09:18
Ooops, I meant 'plan' not 'plane'. Sorry for the typo. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 09 June 2007 16:43
Oh you're evil ... I can only imagine what all the craziness in part 3 will involve! I love that River has upped the ante, that is so very like our mischievious reader!
Sunday, 10 June 2007 04:46
Damn it woman...even if it spoils a surprise, you've left me all kinds of stimulated without the gorram payoff!

;D

Some fabulous work here, Gwenfrewi! Definitely can't wait to see how you get Mal and Jayne nearly naked together, Simon participating in sex party with Serenity's first couple and River feeling all kinds of unfulfilled;D

BEB

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