Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Dress Up

Sunday, February 12, 2006

Kaylee, River and Inara pass the time till their arrival to Jayne's family, by getting all dolled up. The crew... well they aren't against the finished results. Sequel to Breakfest and Clean Up

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2574    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Pained Hearts

Chapter 3

Authors Note: Just wanted to remind people this story takes place after the movie… But Wash didn’t die just hurt his shoulder and River is saner than before and speaks with I and myself instead of her and she. Well most of the time. --- This one is kinda weird, it is just more of a pull through till they get to Mattie and to establish thing between certain characters…. ENJOY!

Zoe sat nervously in the infirmary. She had answered Simon’s questions, and it appeared they were both thinking the same thing. The pregnancy test would take a half-an-hour.

“You know we should just ask River.” Simon joked, trying to break the tension that hung heavily in the room. “It wouldn’t take as long.”

They both laughed making Zoe feel a little better. “You think so Doc.” Simon nodded. “She may be young, but since the whole Miranda thing, she has been better. She only needs a shot every few days. And she seems to be able to read people and herself a lot better…” Simon said with a smile. “Though, I still worry about her. She is still a child, but at times she seems older than all of us. It almost scares me.” He confessed. Zoe nodded in agreement.

“She is growing up Doc. And she seems to be attached to Jayne this morning.” She pointed out. Simon sighed. “Oh, I noticed. I can’t say I am pleased with that. I found Jayne asleep in her room, this morning. Though I understand he is going through something rough right now. I kind of know how he feels. The fear of loosing someone you love…” Simon stopped and swallowed hard, trying not to think about loosing River. Zoe smiled knowingly at the doctor. She too almost lost a dear one.

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Meanwhile in Inara’s shuttle Kaylee and River giggled as Inara showed them the dresses she had.

“How about we do both of your hair, make-up and you two can each pick out a dress to wear for the day?” Inara asked with a smile. Kaylee couldn’t help but squeal in excitement. “So we get to look all shiny and proper wearin’ your pretties.” Inara laughed and sat down beh

Comments
Sunday, 12 February 2006 19:10
I like it!

Keep going with it! A pregnancy is nine months, that gives you plenty of time to write about!
TRINITYTAO
Sunday, 12 February 2006 19:20
awesome
it made me cry
happy tears
keep it up

:D
Sunday, 12 February 2006 20:29
There are some really nice aspects to this story. The interaction between Zoe and Wash being just one of them. Looking forward to reading more.

Taya

(Tiny little pet peeve... it's 'dying' not dieing.)
Sunday, 12 February 2006 22:03
Good work, I loved the descriptions of Kaylee and River. The details about the hair were nice touches.
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 22:52
Good job, better that u weren't so heavy with the River/jayne thing. Not used to that. But great job keep going.

Just in my opinion you tend to overuse the lil' albatross thing to much sometimes. It was cool the first few times but if you use it to much it ends up getting annoying. And in the context you used it in in this story (Mal looking for Kaylee and his lil'albatross) felt akward. But thats me. Its no biggy
Saturday, 18 February 2006 03:46
ooo i love! poor jayne :( but im so hapy zoe's pregnant!! yay
keep it up
Saturday, 25 February 2006 16:00
“Ta ma duh…” Jayne muttered. Barefooted River padded over to the rail. She leaned over it, all her hair cascaded down past her shoulders. “Gladly,” she mouth to Jayne. His mouth snapped shut.

wheeeeeeeeee-heeeeeee-heee-heeeee!!!! i love it!!! and i completely agree with river...

b

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