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Pained Hearts

Saturday, February 11, 2006

Mattie is dieing... Jayne has only a Moon-brained girl to ease his heart ache.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2605    RATING: 8.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Pained Hearts

Disclaimer: I can only wish to own this series… If I did, there would be a lot more Simon and Kaylee sex. And River and Jayne would be going at it like rabbits.

Author’s Note: Okay everyone, this story takes place after the movie… AND WASH DIDN’T DIE! I like him too much. SOOO we are going to say he turned some and the spike hit him in the shoulder. The Alliance got to him before the Reavers. He just had his shoulder replaced, so he can’t fly, and Zoe won’t let him do anything and is babying him.

*So this is a River/Jayne or Rayne Fan fiction… Umm… It is my first posted… So Enjoy

She giggled as he pressed her against the hall of the ship. Her hair hung slightly in her face hiding her lustful eyes and sly smile. His lips were quickly on hers making her grind into him, bringing them both immense pleasure from the simple movement. They were both panting hard when he broke the kiss. Even their pants were husky sounds. There was a faint banging sound as she wrapped her legs around his hips. Making them both groan in pleasure. His hands went to her small hips, only to find under her over-sized dress, she was bare as the day she was born. That only made him harder for her. The pounding started to get louder, as she unbuttoned his pants with a wicked little smirk playing on her lips. Slowly she slid her hand down his pants and took hold of his rather large shaft. He let out a moan and bucked against her.

“JAYNE! GORRAMIT GET UP!” Mal yelled, startling Jayne awake.

Jayne growled at the loss of the girl against him. “Hwoon dahn. Not again!” He said to himself.

“Jayne you up?” Mal called down into his bunk again.

“Yeah, Mal… What the Hell you get me up for?” Jayne asked climbing out of his bunk into the front hall. Mal was standing next to him with an annoyed look. “I have been trying to get you up for the last twenty minutes. Jayne, you got a call on the cortex. It’s your Ma…” Mal said trying to look uninterested in the whole thing.

As soon as Jayne heard it was

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 11 February 2006 04:54
I liked most of the concept of your story. It was very well written and you have tremendous skill. But the concept of River and Jayne seems way too akward. I don't personally think that river and Jayne would ever be a couple. Let alone how would Simon feel about it knowing jayne. But it showed the side of jayne we saw in "the message" and that was a very interesting look into the fact that he wasn't a giant brute all about money so I commend you on expanding that.
Kaylee and Simon's romance for some reason feels akward even though it shouldn't. But it was still pretty cool. Its just the River and jayne thing. Way too wierd.

But still awesome, Always great to here other BrownCoats firefly fantasys.
Saturday, 11 February 2006 11:55
Good first try. I like the concept of River comforting Jayne.
Saturday, 11 February 2006 11:58
Poor Jayne but I am really liking it that everybody gets behind him and just wants to help. It was a bit eerie River telling Jayne's Ma what to do to help Mattie breathing until they get there but then so very River. As for River and Jayne being a couple and nobody batting an eye that felt odd. I do hope they get there in time. Ali D :~)
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JOY
Saturday, 11 February 2006 21:55
AMEN! you said it! The first time i saw Serenity, it was a bootleg (don't yell at me, I bought the movie AND series on DVD immediately afterwards), and i thought it was just a cruel joke to piraters that they would kill not one but TWO crew members! ARG! why! Book's story had yet to be revealed at all! Great start on this fic btw. :)
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 20:46
it's been too long (ie. a coupla days) without a good rayne fic, and this just hits the spot...

b
Friday, 20 October 2006 18:37
Thank you for bringing was back to visit the verse =) I can't believe that I never had a chance to read this shiny fic, tell me there's a sequel...
Friday, 20 October 2006 18:37
Grr... I meant bringing Wash back...stupid typos.
SHADOWANGEL
Thursday, 29 January 2009 23:00
WOW, really loved this! River waas just creepy enough, without going overboard... And it was great that she was catching stray thoughts from Jayne! :)

Have a question though... What is Jayne's Ma's name? Because she introduces herself as Vera Cobb, but then there's the line after River's advice that says "Ellie just stared at the screen." Am I just not reading this right?

Anyways, loved it! And thank you for Wash's Resurrection!

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