Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

The death of Kaylee Frye(Part 2)

Wednesday, February 8, 2006

Sorry 'bout the last one,I was a bit rushed(Twenty minutes is not enough time to write at all well) Without further ado, heres the rest of it. Simon/Kaylee.

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Kaylee blushed furiously, turning red as a spotlight. She and Simon rushed about, trying to get there clothes back on. Once she had her bra and panties on, she turned to Mal a mite huffily. "Yes, cap'n, what is it?"

Mal turned away, finally, as she struggled to get her pants back on. "Kaylee, much as you both like goin' at it, I need you in the engine room, right now and sooner. Someat is wrong with my ship. Remember what I said? My ship don't crash. She crashes, you crashed her."

Kaylee turned toward Simon as he stumbled in his pants, trying to get them back on over his underpants, both blushing furiously. "Not to worry, cap'n. Everythin'll be shiny with Serenity, not to fret. I'll be there soon." She hastily brought her shirt on, which left her shoes and socks to find. Simon cursed as he fell flat on his face, tripping up in his pants again.

"Damn, but I belive that he's spying on us. Wish it could wait. FUCK!!!" he yelled as he tripped again.

"'Why', doctor, is simple," said Mal frostily. "My ship needs a mechanic to keep 'er goin'. No mechanic, no working ship, which'll leave us all with a very bad case of horrible dead, that even you can't fix." With that, Mal left, closing the hatch behind him. The two of them kept up looking for their respective clothing articles. Mal shivered at seeing his mechanic with his ships medic.

Inara and Jayne were there when he came back intothe dining room proper. Jayne looked up, scowled, and said "those two been ruttin' again?" Inara just smiled into her teacup.

***

Dinner that night was more subdued than usual. For one thing, Mal and Inara didn't have their usual shouting match, which bespoke of two things: first, their relationship was going well, and that Mal was still sore at Kaylee and Simon. Zoe ate in silence, brooding over all the crap that happened in her life. Kaylee was exhausted after three hours working in the engine, which she had let get a little too far gone, thanks to Simons ministrations. The pr

Comments
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 22:11
Man with that title I wasn't even sure if I'd even open it... lol, good save on those last two words ;)
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 22:14
:o That'll teach me to get impatient and want to read the end! I just read the end of the last sentence before the rest of the fic (because I'm silly :() and I thought she'd died! Bleh! Silly me. Very good! Really enjoyable and sweet. :D
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 22:19
Ditto what misskitten said. I didn't even want to open this because of the title! A nice, sweet little tale, tho.

ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 22:35
And now the inevitable question that is always given to good storytellers with baited breath... will we get more (please, please, please :) )

-goblueguy
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 23:04
'Course you'll get more!!! I love this kinda stuff, so I'll write it. Shiny!!!
DARKNESSADVOCATE
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 23:32
You had me going there. I did even get it until I read it twice.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 February 2006 05:16
Blackbeanie-
You scared the livin' crap out of me!
Still, that was great, write more.
Thursday, 09 February 2006 13:08
For one horrible, terrible minute I thought you had really killed Kaylee off which would have upset me no end. I **loved** getting clued in by the last line. Oh yeah, wake up Kaylee Tam, you have a whole boatload of shiny stories still waiting to be told! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 09 February 2006 16:11
I glad I'm not the only one who had to read that twice!!! The first time for some reason it popped into my head that Simon some how killed River and gave Kaylee her body!!! Am I a nut or what!!! That's what I get for working nights!!! Also, could be the tylenol pm talking?!?.........OK I have issues!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 February 2006 19:36
I so saw that coming! I knew you didn't mean you'd kill her. With a title like that, killing her would have been too obvious. I knew that you meant it metaphorically, Kaylee Frye dying and becoming Kaylee Tam.

Still an excellent piece!
Friday, 10 February 2006 13:53
'Course! I love messin' with ya'lls heads. Shiny!!!
Friday, 17 February 2006 18:12
*relieved* oh thank god, buddha, allah and the flyin' starfish...

b
Saturday, 18 February 2006 02:52
you definitely had me going there. that was hell of a great fic.

good job! are you going to write more? or did you already....i guess i'll soon find out. i'm going to read more / other stories right now.

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