Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The death of Kaylee Frye(PART 1)

Wednesday, February 8, 2006

Dont worry, the title doesnt tell all in this un!
post BDM. This my first fic, so comment and stuff. No beta readers, so any mistakes are all my own. Shiny!!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3238    RATING: 7.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Jayne grunted as he heaved the heavy box into Serenitys cargo hold. The rain on Beaumond came down like needles, driving into his skin. He, Zoe, Mal, and even Simon were hauling medium sized supply crates out of the rain. They were filled with medecines, engine parts, ammo, food, and all the other whatnot. Kaylee was giving the engines a once over, and River was in the cockpit, doing a preflight. Inara was somewhere in her shoulder.

The place seemed empty without Wash, even though it was six months since Miranda. Kaylee suddenly came in from the engines, her hair tied back in a bun. She wore her signature coveralls, and made a beeline for Mal. "Cap'n," she called. "Everythin' is shiny, shes perfect for takin' off!" She stayed out of the rain, so as not to wet her hair.

Mal sauntered over, or as best as he could, hauling a box with him. "Thanks, darlin'. Go an' tell River to get ready for takeoff an all. No need to get yer head wet, we're almost done here."

"Shiny!" She skipped off to the comm. unit, and relayed Mals message. She then turned and eyed Simon, whose chest was clearly visible through his wet shirt. Lightning split the sky asunder, and thunder soon followed.

Simon heaved the last crate on board, and sealed the doors once everyone was inside. They were all shivering when River lifted off. Kaylee went to Simon, and took his hand, and her usual smile got all the wider. "Aw, Simon, yer all wet an' shivery. Cum'on, I'll warm you up a bit," she said with a sugestive smile. Simon smiled.

"All right. L-lead on, baobei."

Jayne smiled, and headed up the catwalk toward the kitchen. Before he left, he stood in the doorway and shook himself off like a dog. Water droplets flew everywhere, on the 'walk, the ceiling, the door, and the railing.

These little things will contribute to the death of Kaylee Frye.

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Mal stalked around the ship in high bad humor. It was a good month since Beaumond, and they hadn't been anyplace wo

Comments
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 20:24
Ooooooooo! I like this. Post more soon!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 20:36
"Inara was somewhere in her shoulder."

Wednesday, 08 February 2006 21:14
...One mistake? Still a great beginning!
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 22:07
Thanks, Burnandboil. I think you'll love the next one. Stay shiny!!
Thursday, 09 February 2006 13:01
Very good though it's very ominimous that you put in the line about little things being the death of Kaylee. So not liking that. I don't want to see anything happen to Kaylee, *dong ma*? Otherwise, very shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 09 February 2006 16:04
Great so far...please don't really kill her though!! That would be sad!!
Friday, 17 February 2006 17:21
"Ah, Kaylee...I see that the good doctor is in."
oh, that mal's a dirty boy...
and no killing kaylee!!!

b

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