Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Sneakin' 'Round

Thursday, January 26, 2006

The title says it all

This is a smutlet, don't read it if you're too young or if there are young children in the room...

No specific pairing actually stated, but we know who we're talking about, don't we.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3837    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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They hadn’t been on Persephone five minutes when Jayne rushed off the ship in his whorin’ shirt, yelling a quick “Don’t wait up!”

He strutted into the bar and looked at the barmaid with an eyebrow raised in a sexy manner.

“Same as last time, handsome. Hell, same as the last three times.” She said, smiling and shaking her head. He sure was getting a reputation as of late.

He threw open the door, saying “Here I am, baby!” There she was; lying on her stomach on the bed, watching a capture and looking like nothing more than a teenager doing her homework. The darkness of her dress caused her pale skin to glow translucently and he thought she looked like an angel. Any similarity to an angel disappeared when he got close enough to see what she was watching. It was the capture they’d taken the last time they’d been together.

He’d been idling in a mild state of arousal since Serenity had landed, but he went straight to full burn at the images on the screen. He’d been holding the capture device in one hand and the other hand had been tangled in her long dark hair, guiding her mouth down his chest.

He sat on the edge of the bed, brushed her hair off of her shoulder and bit the strap of her dress, saying, “Did I taste good, darlin’?”

She looked at him mischievously, “Of course you did, that’s why I went back for seconds. And thirds.”

He growled and let his hands stroke down her arms to hold her wrists. He leaned into her and bit her shoulder lightly. Her expression changed and she twisted her hands free. He couldn’t quite say how she did it, but in about a move and a half, she had him pinned to the bed. A large part of his confusion was her teeth at his throat and her agile legs squeezing his chest. He allowed himself be distracted as she nipped her way up to let her tongue ravish his mouth. She pulled back, sat up, and put the capture in front of him for a moment and asked, “Remember how good that felt? Remember the noises you made?”

He nodded mutely, the sight of this goddess on t

Comments
Thursday, 26 January 2006 05:29
OMG wish I was her!!!!!!!!
Thursday, 26 January 2006 05:31
Oh...my....rutting...BUDDHA, Samafin! You have made my day with this one. Ya gots a gift for saying a lot in a little bit of words. A whole gorram festival of heightening blood pressure for me in this one.

Thank you. LOVE your sly non-telling of the girl's identity, and then...we know for sure anyhow. LOVED your Jayne and his "darlin'" talkin'.

Fave line: "He’d been holding the capture device in one hand and the other hand had been tangled in her long dark hair, guiding her mouth down his chest. "

Sighs, contented. This kinda writing is what inspires me!!!
Thursday, 26 January 2006 12:04
Good, good, good. Fooled 'em all.
Thursday, 26 January 2006 23:13
Oh man that was good. Threw me for a loop...fantastic!!!
Friday, 27 January 2006 01:09
Yes Yes YES YESSSS......thats purty good smut I like the clean kinda smut
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 21:10
mystery!rayne rocks!!!!! and i totally agree with Blaze: I WISH I WAS FREAKIN' HER!!!!

b
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 21:10
oh, god that came out wrong...

b
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 February 2006 16:46
I gotta stop reading your stuff at work, turning blue from repressed laughter is not a good look. Makes everyone rush to ones aid.

I loved it.

Wrenn
PERIODICBRILLIANCE
Sunday, 01 April 2007 05:39
GAH! I'll ditto ItsaWash's "Oh...my...ruttin'...Buddha!" That was so freaking good! I love Rayne and you did a fantastic job of capturing a really awesome moment.

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