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VIOLENT HEART (Chpt. 3)

Tuesday, February 18, 2003

An incident on a trade planet induces some strange changes in Jayne, and they have quite the effect on Kaylee, putting her in the line of fire when things turn violent.

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VIOLENT HEART

Chpt 3: Slow Burn

*lemon warnings*

:::present time, amid much tossing & turning :::

1.

::toss::

Jayne sat on the end of his bunk, naked, staring at the wall. Couldn't focus. The heat was affecting the bump on his head. Kaylee had been right earlier.

Kaylee.

If it hadn't been for her, Mal would've taken to the sky.

His vision cleared a bit. Saw the collage of girly pin ups on the metal wall. It was too rutting hot to jerk off.

His head started to pound again and he crushed his brow with a fist.

Mal had finally found it in his hide to be civil these last few days - said coming after him hadn't been on his list of priorities. The suspicious ghosts that were following his ass could've easily been after the Serenity and her passengers. Told him he was damn lucky to have someone like Kaylee's caring and concern in the first place.

Jayne fell back on the bunk with a heavy grunt and covered his face with an arm.

Kaylee was always giving out all kinds of caring and concern unsolicited, even to those she shouldn't. Like, in his holy opinion, the doctor.

Or even him. Hell. There was probably plenty o' times she'd been right there by his side (even if she was pissed at him), and damn if he couldn't recall a single one up 'till now.

He took his arm away from his face and suddenly the light wasn't so bad. Even the pain sang a little less loudly.

He rubbed at his bruised chest and closed his eyes.

'Kaylee.'

::turn::

Too tired to wash, Kaylee stripped down to her under things and flopped back on her bunk, hoping beyond hope that she'd be able to finish rebuilding the stabilizer in the morning, and that tonight, for once, she'd be able to fall asleep quick.

That wasn't going to happen.

Earlier, when she finally returned in search of some dinner, the kitchen had been deserted of crew and playing cards and it'd been a while since she talked to anyone but herself.

Which was probably just shiny, as it was ...

She hadn't been able to stop thinkin

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 February 2003 03:41
keep it going! I always thought Jayne & Kaylee made a better fit than prissy lil' Simon anyday. :) Write write write! :)
Tuesday, 18 February 2003 03:52
Great story, and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I don’t know what to expect when you say we might hate you because of the next chapter, but that makes me want to read it all the more. Keep it up.

-and whoever you are anonymous, please don’t call my Simon a prissy. He's a HOTTIE!
Tuesday, 18 February 2003 16:31
This gets better and better. I like your use of color-imagery in this one. It gave what you call "fluffiness" a degree of depth. I think. I also like that there's a certain degree of second-guessing and fumbling. Makes it very believable. You've written a very jumpy Simon. I'd be interested to hear why.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 February 2003 17:08
Why does everyone hate Simon?

Anyway, I like your idea of fluff. Bring it on. If I can still love Sarahetc for killing Simon, I can still love you for what you're about to unleash on us!

Bring it on!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 20 February 2003 20:26
All I can say is Hot!, Hot! Hot!. So hot you're scorching.
Always knew that there was a fine figure of a man there in Jayne.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Write on McDuff.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 21 February 2003 19:24
Wow. This is sooo goood. This is so well written. I can't wait to see what happens next!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 08 April 2003 20:01
Any chance of finishing this? I like Kaylee and Jayne together. Sort of an opposites attract. And Jayne is definitely hot in his own way.
JAYNE
Monday, 22 September 2003 19:32
LOVED IT ,I THINK IT SHOULD BE PUBLISHED ON TO A BOOK
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 July 2004 21:56
Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

*dies* *isdead*
Thursday, 04 August 2005 23:52
Excellent interepretation on the Kaylee/Jayne pairing. Well-rounded, logical, well-explained.
Tuesday, 11 October 2005 06:22
Somebody said Jayne is definitely hot in his own way? What in the seven gorram hells? Jayne is DE HOTTEST hunka man meat on that boat! Okay, okay, I'll calm down a tetch. But I just get all synapses firin' when I read good horizontal mambo of this type, especially when it involves my man Jayne. Errr, OUR man Jayne, since I obviously must share. Thankee for the read. It was moist (and shiny.)
-Roving Eye

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