Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

VIOLENT HEART (Chpt. 1)

Wednesday, January 29, 2003

An incident on a trade planet induces some strange changes in
Jayne, and they have quite the effect on Kaylee, putting her in the line of fire when things turn violent.

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TITLE: Violent Heart (Chpt. 1 of 6)

AUTHOR: DesertDragon

Rated R

Kaylee/Jayne

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Disclaimer: Mutant Enemy & Joss Whedon own all; all's I got is this shiny bottle of scotch.

CHAPTER ONE: THE SLAUGHTERED LAMB

Prolog: [Present day - 2517]

Heat is a hard element to control. Especially in a confined space. Like Serenity. No windows on a ship. You can walk down the metal corridors and literally see and smell the air burning. Shimmering on steel. Creeping into your brain. Making you loopy. Kaylee was deep in the engine room, her palms so slippery, she kept dropping the wrench. It clattered to the grate a fourth time before she realized it was time to take a break. Too unbearable. A week ago the temperature stabilizers went crazy on ship, but thanks to the Captain (and the stop they made on Outpost 10) she now had the parts to repair her.

Should've stayed on 10, Kaylee rambled to herself. At least then we'd still have some fresh air to escape into.

But as it always went on this side of the 'verse, you fix one thing and something else goes wonky. Or make that some one else.

Case in point:

Jayne was sitting at the dinner table, one long leg propped up on a corner, the other stretched under the table, both shoe-less. He was pushed languidly back in his chair, grinning like a wildcat, a set of cards in one hand, and wiggling a sock-clad toe in the direction of Wash.

He, Wash and Zoe were hoarding the kitchen, playing a game of Strip Poker. Playing for coin as well as clothes, not to mention ventilation. As usual, Wash was loosing.

"Ain't no amount of cards gonna help you this time, Red. Just cough it up."

"I feel so violated," Wash mocked, and slid off his shirt.

Truth be told, Jayne wasn't much better off. Kaylee got an eye full of his boxers as she managed to slink past t

Comments
Wednesday, 29 January 2003 15:06
Oh no you don't! Don't you dare give us just this and leave us hangin' like that!

Want more!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 03 February 2003 04:28
Please post chapter 2 under the same name so we can find it!!! This is really the BEST Jayne story we've had in awhile. I LOVE the dimensions you gave him, (I bet Adam would too!)and you captured Kaylee well, also. I hate to admit it, but I pulled a stunt similar to hers when I was cute, stubborn and clueless...
I hope I can conjure up visions of 'Vera' over my left shoulder next time I get lost!!! THANKS!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 03 February 2003 04:29
Please post chapter 2 under the same name so we can find it!!! This is really the BEST Jayne story we've had in awhile. I LOVE the dimensions you gave him, (I bet Adam would too!)and you captured Kaylee well, also. I hate to admit it, but I pulled a stunt similar to hers when I was cute, stubborn and clueless...
I hope I can conjure up visions of 'Vera' over my left shoulder next time I get in trouble!!! THANKS!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 July 2004 21:20
Wow, this is great! I love how you gave Jayne such a strong, dynamic characterization! Amazing job!
JAZMYN
Thursday, 03 February 2005 08:30
it is so kool u have to right more
jazz
Tuesday, 11 October 2005 05:57
Well, I got me a distinct advantage over the earlier reviewers 'cause I happened upon this gem knowing full well there are sequels! I've got a powerful feeling, though, that no matter how much more you've writ on it, might not be enough. This story is large and lovely and leaves one longing for more. Keep it up, will ya?
-Roving Eye

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