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New Beginnings: Part 1

Saturday, January 21, 2006

Ok, this is a re-write of my original and first fic. It's been split into to parts for a much easier read and also si no longer in block format for everyone's enjoyment. Feedback is good. This story is after the BDM. Thanks for readin'.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2357    RATING: 8.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author’s Note 1: These characters are not mine, but I’m borrowing them for a minute, thanks Joss! Oh, and Firefly isn’t mine either, but I’m still stealing it for a few minutes. Hope Joss forgives me.

Author’s Note 2: This takes place three months post-Serenity, the BDM. Hope ya’ll enjoy this. Please give feedback. I appreciate it very much. Enjoy!

Author’s Note 3: This is a PG-13 rated fic. Mostly for the Violence,Language, and some sexual content. Pairings involve…well, you’ll see.

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New Beginnings: Part 1

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Mal was carrying a plate with two sandwiches in one hand and two water bottles in the other. He left the kitchen and started walking down the hall towards the cockpit of Serenity.

“Captain!” Mal turned around to see Zoë standing in the hall.

“Yes,” he replied.

“Everything is loaded and Kaylee’s back on board with some new engine parts and tools to fix the mule.”

“That settles that problem.”

“We have to leave within the hour if we want to make the appointment with our new client.”

“We’re leavin' as soon as I have my lunch Zoë. A hungry Captain ain’t a happy Captain.”

“And no one likes it when you’re grumpy sir,” she replied as she headed toward the cargo bay. Mal started walking down the hall again.

“Mal, we got a problem, a big one,” said Jayne as he walked over to Mal.

“What is it now Jayne,” he replied to the mercenary.

“I can’t find Vera anywhere. I looked everywhere and I even asked that crazy moonbrained sister of the Doc’s. Someone stole my gorram gun Mal!”

“You didn’t leave it in your bed this time did ya,” replied Mal.

“I…” Jayne paused for a minute and thought about what Mal said. “I gotta go check my bed.” Mal just shook his head in disbelief. Finally I’ll get to eat my gorram sandwich now in peace and quiet, Mal thought to himself.

He continued walking down the hall and entered the cockpit.

Comments
Saturday, 21 January 2006 22:48
Very good. I like it alot.

Keep it up, can't wait for part 2. :D
HWOONDANPADAWAN
Saturday, 21 January 2006 23:56
River is sounding surprisingly sane all of a sudden. What's happened? You've captured Jayne pretty acurately, though.
Sunday, 22 January 2006 00:00
I assumed after Miranda, she would become more sane because the memory of the Reavers were no longer forced into her brain. She no longer has that overpowering memory in her head and is becoming more sane. That's my take on it anyhow.
Sunday, 22 January 2006 01:13
I Concur!
Tuesday, 24 January 2006 00:07
Same way I'd like to think about River... she's finally growing up. I personally can't think of River being 17 anymore, not after knowing Summer's actually almosty 25 years old... seems kinda weird. She still could pass for a teen, though. :)

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