Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Have Wings, Will Fly Chapter Six: Spa Treatment

Monday, January 2, 2006

Second day of vacation, and the crew decides to pamper themselves a little bit. Can their calm last for long?
Honestly, is that even possible with our heros? Didn't think so.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3476    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

Have Wings, Will Fly

Chapter Six: Spa Treatment

This goes without saying, but everyone’s comments are greatly appreciated. Anyone who has posted a fanfic has to admit to checking it every five minutes to see if someone has commented, right? No? That’s just me?

Anyway, thanks again, and without further ado, chapter six!

A/N I don’t think I put this on any of my other chapters, but this ‘verse ain’t mine, it’s Joss’s. All hail the great Joss for giving us these shiny characters to play with, though!

~*~*~

The night grew late and the stars slowly appeared like diamonds on velvet. Delmar was certainly pretty at night, seeing as the populace was relatively small and there were virtually no lights. Jayne’s strumming on his guitar became soft plucks as he began to nod off on his seat. River was asleep on Inara’s lap while Inara played with River’s soft, dark hair absentmindedly. Kaylee, too, was far gone with her arms wrapped possessively around Simon’s waist. She smiled and nuzzled into his stomach. Arden was slumped over, his head resting on his chest and snoring quietly.

“Zoe, I hear there’s a rather quaint spa in town. Nothin’ much, but I also hear they give mud baths…” Wash smiled sweetly at Zoe, who was busy poking more kindling in the fire.

“Mm, sounds inviting. How about it, Sir? Nice relaxin’ day in town tomorrow?” Zoe turned to Mal, who was teetering dangerously on his box seat.

“Huh? Sure, sure, Zo. Sounds…” and with that, Mal fell off his seat, sound asleep.

“Saw that coming.” Inara chuckled and shook her head.

“Well, we best be gettin’ off to bed now. My baby needs his rest!” Zoe leaned over and kissed her husband.

“So? Who gets to carry me to my tent?”

~*~*~

Inara and Mal laid River down to sleep.

“She looks so cute like that. Especially since she didn’t just kill any folk.” Mal grinned at Inara and looked fondly at his little albatross.

“Mal, I do have to get to an appointment next week, you know. This vacation is pleasant, and much needed, but I do have my

Comments
2X2
Monday, 02 January 2006 06:52
Awww... I love Mal and Inara watchin' the sunset together!
Monday, 02 January 2006 07:24
BWAHAHAHAHA. Kaylee's gotta wrangle every male on the ship. Simon's big brotherness is spreading. “Now, Simon. There comes a time in every girl’s life when--" Perfect.

Monday, 02 January 2006 08:06
putting jayne in a pink toga was priceless.
Monday, 02 January 2006 11:17
You can't wait to write Chapter 7? I can't wait to read it. So... more of the waiting then. I really liked this and especially liked Kaylee giving Inara a nudge in the right direction to mend things with Mal. Looks like River and Arden are going to become an item - wonder how Simon will deal with that. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 02:02
You had me laughing all through this chapter. I especially loved Wash getting toted around by Mal and Jayne :) Oh and Jayne in his "light red" toga, perfect!
Friday, 06 January 2006 17:34
“Ah. My loyal subjects. Do not fret, as this is a most noble task, and you will be rewarded in the afterlife. But for now, MUSH, YOU DOGS!” Wash cackled.

somehow, i always figured wash for a cackler...

b
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 29 January 2006 17:31
lol, as I said B4 I simply love your crew, this is great writing, keep it up, more plz more! :) sooo happy at the parings you are making in your tale, and gotta love the "Big Brother protectiveness" from Jayne, Simon, and Mal, honestly never thought Jayne would be protective of "moonbrain" but hey, it's endering :)
Friday, 14 July 2006 02:50
For the longest time I've been wanting to read a fic where River meets somebody special - somebody not Jayne. And this is a very well-written piece, I say! I love your S/K moments and the M/I bickering in this chapter - spot-on. Very cool idea, the rescue of another Academy victim who's getting overly friendly with River. ;) One of these days Simon will just have to learn to let it go, and I'd be interested to see how other writers handle his inevitable confrontation with River when that time comes.

You're an excellent writer and I love the Washline you've added to the fic. Uncle Joss doesn't know how much fun he's missing without the poor guy. ;)

But where's Chapter 7??!?!!? Can't wait to see it!!!
Wednesday, 06 February 2008 03:17
i absolutely LOVE the way you write jayne and wash. waiting impatiently for chapter seven!!

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.