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Have Wings, Will Fly Chapter Five: Beachside

Saturday, December 24, 2005

They crew arrives at the oceanside city of Delmar to enjoy a semi-relaxing day at the beach. Funnyness ensues.

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Have Wings, Will Fly

Chapter 5: Beachside

Just to clear up any confusion about the last line of chapter 4, I love the idea of Book kind of ‘watching’ over the ship, especially River. The touch on the shoulder was simply a figure of her imagination, not Arden. He’s way too shy to approach her now!

Thanks again for the comments, I hope everyone is enjoying this fic as much as I am writing it.

*Sorry about your shirt, Gypsylife! I know I’ve definitely ruined more than one article of clothing while reading stuff on this site!*

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Newhall approached quickly in the very early hours of the morning. The sun was just rising on the edge of the planet and shone brightly on the sleeping River.

Inara woke in the middle of the night and, unable to fall back asleep, crept into the co-pilot’s seat to make sure River didn’t accidentally kick the auto pilot off again. She covered the small girl with a smooth, peach blanket she had in her shuttle. Inara smiled as she watched a thin dribble of drool escape from River’s mouth. Comforted by River’s gentle slumber, Inara eventually nodded off in her chair.

She awoke and hour later to a loud clatter coming echoing from the kitchen. Wrapping herself in her blanket, Inara stepped into the dining room to find Arden hastily opening cupboards and looking under pots and pans.

Inara cleared her throat, and immediately regretted it as Arden jumped and dropped the large cooking pot he was holding.

Mal, never a heavy sleeper, leaped out of his bunk, clambered up the ladder, and burst into the kitchen, but not before slamming on Jayne’s door yelling “Jayne! Wake the hell up!”

Both men stumbled into the kitchen to find Inara in her nightgown, and Arden holding his hands up in a surrender position.

“Huh.”

“I-I-I was just trying to make breakfast. You know, a peace offering for my less-than-appreciated arrival yesterday. I’m really sorry if I woke anyone up,” Arden shuffled to pick up the pans strewn across the floor.

“Well, now that we’re up, I wouldn’t mind a

Comments
Saturday, 24 December 2005 04:09
RG you are so gorram good with the funny. First Mal popping Jayne on the back of the head...and omg I laughed so hard when Simon just raised his hand. And yes I have a request. Can I borrow your funny to write my fic...you are so good at making me laugh. Keep it up. I loved Mal in this one...


Waiting for chapter 5...hey we're going at the same pace....race ya..no..not really
Saturday, 24 December 2005 05:32
Gypsylife- feel free to borrow! Thanks for commenting. And to let you know, I had a blast coming up with stuff for this chapter. I'm very proud! (and not for my talent for alienating people)
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 24 December 2005 07:57
This fic is so much fun to read, you've had me smiling all the way through. I absolutly love the way you write the crew, especially Wash and Mal :)
Saturday, 24 December 2005 07:58
That last comment was me btw, silly me, didn't realize I wasn't logged in.
Saturday, 24 December 2005 09:00
How is Wash going to move around on the sand in his wheelchair? Maybe Kaylee will put it on runners? I had to chuckle at Jayne. Mal's notion to sleep out in improvised tents (bedsheets no less) seems doomed to any bit of wind that might blow or rain that might fall overnight. Hmm, I think Inara and River are going to be the only cosy ones... Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 24 December 2005 15:29
Love jayne learing at Inara and the smack by Mal... Great read.
Saturday, 24 December 2005 21:17
Jayne studied Inara none-too-discreetly. Mal noticed the direction of his leer and promptly smacked him upside the head.

“I weren’t doing nothin’ Mal!” Jayne rubbed the back of his head.

“Yeah, but you were thinkin’. And you thinkin’, of any kind, is a source for worry.”

mal doesn't like other boys looking at his things...

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ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 29 January 2006 17:14
Mmmm shiney, love that u kept Wash alive, I love this series plz keep writing more and more :D

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