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Thursday, December 15, 2005

River imparts some wisdom and a little nonsense to our captain while he sits contemplating past events.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2325    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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So, I'm ashamed to say that it's taken me this long to join the wonderful community you have here on fff.net, but to smooth my arrival, I thought I'd share a story I posted a while ago over on Fanfiction.net. Hope you enjoy, stay shiny everyone!

Spoilers: Slight ones for Serenity (the movie) but nothing too huge.

Disclaimer: Neither Mal, River, nor any of the other things associated with the world of Firefly belong to me. They are on my Christmas list though.

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She glides into the room and takes a seat opposite him at the table. He lifts his mug to her in a silent greeting and takes a deep draught. “She flying smooth, little albatross?”

“Water, water everywhere and not a drop to drink.”

He sets the mug back down, amusement written across his face for the time being. “What was that?”

She smirks. “You read the poem.”

He considers asking her how she knows that, before rolling his eyes at his own stupidity. “I guess I did at that. You got anything illuminating to say; poetically speaking?”

She breathes deeply and a smile stretches across her face as she rises from her chair and spins dreamily across the floor. “I am a river.” She declares, arms reaching up above her head.

He chuckles deeply and takes another long pull of his drink, the liquid sending licking tendrils of heat down to the very soles of his feet. “I suppose you are.”

With a thump, she sits back down on her chair, grace momentarily forgotten as she collapses in a comfortable sprawl of limbs. “I won’t quench your thirst.” She declares, looking him dead in the eyes.

Caught in the middle of his next drink, he sputters and chokes, suddenly not liking the direction of the conversation.

“Ah, no.” He coughs, wipes whiskey away on his shirtsleeve. “Now I ain’t never, ever , said anything ‘bout-“

She looks at him with confusion, seriousness in her gaze. “I’m not trying to seduce you, Captain.”

“Ah, no.” He says again, shooting a nervous look around the room to make sure no one is there to listen, “I shoul

Comments
Thursday, 15 December 2005 01:39
Oh yes, loved this! Now it would be shiny to see what happened next. Call it an early gorram Christmas present. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 15 December 2005 02:12
Thanks very much, I'm glad you liked it. As for a continuation, erm, I think somethings are better left behind closed doors... or hatches, whatever. Again though, thank you for the comment, it's very much appreciated! - hjea
2X2
Thursday, 15 December 2005 02:20
OH, lovely! I liked this alot... please continue with this! I want to see what happens behind that shuttle door!!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 15 December 2005 03:24
squeeeeeeeeeee! I love it! And it ended at just the right moment.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 15 December 2005 19:09
Yay, a squee, I got a squee! Thanks very much for commenting, glad you enjoyed.
Thursday, 15 December 2005 19:10
Oops, forgot to sign in. That's me above. Just thought I'd mention.
CUB
Friday, 16 December 2005 16:59
Nice little story. It's always fun letting River see the truth when no one else can.

Concise and good characterizations, although it was a little jarring going from present tense to past tense.
Saturday, 17 December 2005 22:04
*loves*

b
Sunday, 18 December 2005 18:46
I was a little worried about the present to past tense switch, but I decided to experiment and see how it turned out. I probably won't do it again, but thanks for commenting. *loves* comments back.
Sunday, 18 December 2005 20:05
very believable mal/river exchange--i liked it

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