Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

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Thursday, December 22, 2005

Mal sees a familiar face after finishing a job on Persephone. Takes place between the end of the series and the BDM.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2308    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Not mine to have, this world and all in it belong to the all-powerful Joss. Look on his works ye mighty and despair.

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He still wasn't sure how it caught his eye, tucked away in the corner like it was, but he was on his way back from another unpleasant meeting with Badger, when he stopped short in front of the little art vendor's stall and turned to stare at the portrait.

Whoever the artist was, he had obvious talent, for there was no doubt in his mind about who was staring back at him from behind the dusty frame. She was younger, that was for sure, probably no more than 17 or 18, but little more than that had changed. Same dark hair tumbling down onto bare shoulders, lips curved upwards in that knowing smile, chin lifted proudly though without arrogance; she was everything that she had been when she had left Serenity and gone her own way three months before. There was only one thing, something that he couldn't put his finger on, that was off about her.

The short, dirty vendor sidled up to where he stood transfixed and grinned wolfishly up at him before crossing his arms over his bulging stomach and turning to stare appreciatively at the picture.

"Pretty, en't she?"

He grunted in reply and shifted to the side to try and get away from the man's smell.

"Nah, pretty don't do 'er justice. Gorram beautiful, in a way to make a man all sorts a’ willin’."

Her skin glowed on the canvas, even in the dim light, the same way it did in the candlelight of her shuttle or the low lights of the kitchen during late-nights around the table.

"She's come straight from the central core, from Sihnon or some such high and mighty place. A real piece a' finery. You can have 'er cheap, a real deal you wouldn't get nowhere else, I can tell you."

There was no background, or at least nothing more than blurred shapes, the artist having devoted all his skills to capturing her. To just her.

"Look at those eyes - they're just beggin' you to take her home, how 'bout it?"

He stared at her again,

Comments
2X2
Thursday, 22 December 2005 23:42
Ow....
That hurt, but I could see it :o)
Thursday, 22 December 2005 23:53
Wow, the angst. Poor Mal.
Friday, 23 December 2005 00:53
I read this ages ago, must have been at Fanfiction.net, and it is as good now as it was first time round. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 23 December 2005 17:15
Thanks for all the comments, I did kind of heap on the angst here, but believe me, in my heart there is only love and fluffy, shiny smooches. Lots of them.

Tons.
Saturday, 24 December 2005 19:41
*whimper* owwy...

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MCK
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 23:31
Sometimes I get really frustrated and even alittle angry with Mal. Make up your DAMN mind!!! Do you want her, take her. Don't want her, get over it!!!
Then I remember that Mal is not real real. Only real to us here at fff.net.
So I know someone else here understands what I mean. Can I smack him?

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