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Wednesday, November 23, 2005

Continuation of “In The Way”. Jayne and Simon compete for Kaylee’s affection.

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This story is a continuation of another fic entitled “In The Way”. It can probably be read on it’s own but I would suggest starting with the first to prevent potential confusion. Thank-you loverly people for all the sweet smelling feedback! Y’all must be the shinest readers a fic writer was ever blessed with in this craphill ‘verse. Jaylee forever!

All hail Joss! He rules and I don't. Nor do I make any money, it's purely for entertainment, etc. etc.

Chapter 1-

As soon as they landed on Whitefall, Jayne disappeared for several hours to reappear suddenly, carrying two pale apples. On his return to the ship, he nodded politely to Shepard Book where he was sitting on the edge of the open cargo bay doors, enjoying the shade and as well as the fresh air as he studied the holy word.

The good book, despite common misconception, had never been specific about the actual nature of the fruit that hung on the tree of knowledge in that sweet garden humanity was forever barred from. Conventional wisdom, stretching all the way back to earth-that-was declared that the fall was caused by an apple- a woman, a snake, and an apple. A rather ordinary and wholesome fruit to be held responsible for so much trouble, Book had occasionally thought. It was after all a supremely useful food crop- hearty, versatile, productive. Not at all what you would picture as a harbinger of evil. Watching the little tableau unfolding before him however, Book was beginning to change his mind.

Jayne had moved his weight bench in front of the open cargo bay doors, where the breeze blew fresh air straight into the ship. He did a few light sets, working up a golden sheen of sweat and then with great ceremony he paused in his workout and bit into one of the apples. He ate it very slowly, savoring each bite in a way Book had never seen him eat anything. Usually Jayne seemed to prefer quantity to quality when it came to his eatin’. This time though, he ate so deliberately, with such slow care that the smell of apple seemed to flood the thin atmosphe

Comments
Wednesday, 23 November 2005 00:44
I have a sudden craving for apples...

Oh my. What a tangled web we weave. Looks to me like it stands.

Jayne: 1.
Simon: 0.
Kaylee: Going to win no matter what.

Me: sighing happy over new Jaylee. Good Jaylee at that. Thank you.
Wednesday, 23 November 2005 01:05
Ya know, the A/N of "Jaylee forever!" kinda takes the fun out of watching the race. I always harbor a secret wish that Simon pulls a rabbit out of his hat at the end.

I can't imagine Kaylee is going to be too pleased if she figures out what's going on. And it looks like Zoe is picking it up, too.

This can only lead to mass confusion. Excellent.
Wednesday, 23 November 2005 03:26
I love Jayne's temptation of Kaylee. You nailed the fact that despite coming off as the untrainable man-ape most of the time, he can be extremely devious, subtle and very, very observant. He more'n likely knows a lot more about the way to Kaylee's heart than Simon does.
Wednesday, 23 November 2005 03:35
Definitely something strange all right!

I love it and I'm looknig forward to more!
Thursday, 24 November 2005 12:28
Great stuff, but Kaylee's not going to like it if she finds out. Needless to say I hope Jayne wins!
Friday, 25 November 2005 17:01
jaylee forever indeed!!! *muches apple*

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ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 02:17
need updates! Must have updates! Getting the twitchies!
SAMANTHA
Friday, 02 December 2005 13:33
More please- I agree with the above- this isn't just Jaylee (which is always welcome) this is GOOD Jaylee!
Sunday, 18 December 2005 22:21
loved the ending. NOT a jaylee fan AT ALL, so yeah. good ending.....i still dont understand how ya see jayne w/kaylee.....i dont see jayne w/no one on crew...
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 18 December 2005 22:25
like i said, pretty shiny ('specially the ending) but jayne's way to self-centered, i think, to ever reealy love someone, much less someone as great as kaylee...i will ALWAYS be a silee fan. no jaylee 4 me. but still a shiny story.
DARKANGELLOVESFIREFLY
Sunday, 05 February 2006 23:27
SHINY!!!!!!


Need I say more??

:)

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