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In The Way - Chap. 6

Tuesday, November 15, 2005

He remembers!

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Kaylee stepped between them and reached out to lay her hand flat against Jayne’s chest. The familiarity of that touch and Jayne’s antagonistic tone was more than Simon could bear suddenly. “No,” He said in an icy disdainful voice, “no problem.” And turned to go.

Kaylee looked as though she had been struck. “Simon, wait-” She reached out towards his retreating back.

A loud snort from Jayne, “Aw, let ‘em go, Kaylee. He’s naught but a spoiled, pansy-assed fool, anyways.” He didn’t bother to keep his voice down and Simon stiffened and paused in his retreat. In the same instant, Kaylee rounded on Jayne.

“Why do you always have to pick at him so?” She demanded, “What did he ever do to you?” Her face was pale and her jaw set. She stepped closer. She was angry at Jayne now, when just a few moments before she had been touching him. Simon turned around too and was watching. Trapped by Kaylee’s fury and the docs watching eyes, Jayne felt a moment of panic and something near to despair. It was all the docs fault, Jayne thought. Coming around, always in the way, never giving the two of them a moment alone. Simon all stiff and shiny who couldn’t make her happy even if he cared to try. Kaylee’s question rang in his head, ‘what did he ever do to you?’. Simon’s curious eyes. It all seemed familiar. ‘What did I ever do to you? –‘Civilized conversation.’ – ‘Stiff shiny ways.” – “Who don’t I deserve?’

Something wasn’t right.

Jayne’s eyes fell to Simon’s pale face.

It all clicked.

“You!” he roared. The doc’s eyes went wide with fear- and recognition. Then he ran.

Mal was crossing the common area when he saw his doctor, chased by his muscle, followed lastly by his mechanic come tearing through from the cargo bay. Kaylee was shouting something after the two men but Jayne and Simon both seemed to be conserving their breath for the running. The captain watched the chase blankly for a second. The doc was fast, Mal’d give him that but Jayne was determined and it wasn’t like there was anywhere th

Comments
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 23:38
Words cannot describe how delightful I found this! Your description of Jayne chasing Simon is spot on, as is Mal's reaction to the whole scenario (LOVE the threats - entirely in character!). This has been my favorite installment in this series thus far and I am anxiously awaiting the newly-named continuation. Keep up the absolutely wonderful work!
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 23:59
This is the best so far!

I love this! The bet is fabtastic I love it. Kaylee however will not be amused when/if she finds out.

Mal was great here. Oh I can't wait. Let the games begin!
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 00:13
Very shiny! Simon and Jayne at loggerheads with Kaylee not really able to calm either of them and unknowingly just making matters worse. Loved the Captain forcing them to sort it out and the solution, the gamble that Kaylee will get to choose is surely going to leave one heart broken. Sigh. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 01:06
Vean--

Yeah, Simon would come up with a competition that would fly in the face of Kaylee being a thinking grown up. This can lead nowhere good… I LOVE it!! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 01:25
I don't know what to think.

I really love this series, I do.

But... oh, this competition is going to end badly. Especially if Kaylee finds out.

Phooey to both boys for not letting Kaylee make a reasoned decision. Not really. She ain't just a prize.

You won't keep us waiting long, will you?
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 02:06
Wooo hooo! Let the games begin!
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 02:47
Oh! I liked that! Mal breaking them up... could just picture that! Good work, Captain.
Errr... this is gonna get kinda crooked later, isn't it?
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 05:27
This cannot end well for Jayne and Simon. Meh, I don't care. Kaylee and Jayne are meant to be together. She'll forgive him after a year or two, probably. Update soon, please = )
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 17:11
i love this story!! especailly how simon think about things, and jayne reacts.
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 17:12
oh, i can just tell this is gonna get completely screwy later on...good. i like screwy.

b
Thursday, 17 November 2005 10:11
“I am ten times the man you are.”
Ooh! That gave me chills, too.
Jayne is definitely ALL MAN. Just what Kaylee needs, not a pretty little schoolboy.
Bring it on, Simon. May the best Jayne win.
Thursday, 17 November 2005 11:32
Oh I liked this. But a competition? I don't think Kaylee would like that. Can't wait to find out what happens next, though of course I'm cheering for Jayne!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 20 November 2005 06:28
Heh, "Bring it on, Simon. May the best Jayne win." LOL, CantonHeroine!!!!!
DARKANGELLOVESFIREFLY
Sunday, 05 February 2006 23:15
Boy can I smell disaster on the horizon,
I love it!!!!!

This is going to end badly I just know it.


Great job!
I love it!
PIXIE4MIRANDA
Saturday, 11 March 2006 02:23
Next time, Cap'n, let Jayne beat the snot out of the pansy....

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