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In The Way - Chap. 5, Part I

Tuesday, November 8, 2005

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2858    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Serenity was a week out from New Canaan and headed for Whitefall- the long way through quiet empty space, just how Mal liked it. Their last job had ended a little rough but they had their coin and supplies, nobody was actively chasin’ them, and nothing horrific had happened in days. Everyone should have been happy. But the atmosphere on the ship was strange and tense. Kaylee, usually their own little spot of bright in the black was tense and edgy and bound to drive everyone to distraction with her unending hunt for some elusive mechanical problem she was positive existed but nobody could find.

Mal had spoken to her about it, tried to make her see sense and convince her nothing was wrong but he had finally given up in defeat. He decided it was a touch of the space madness from being cooped up and he determined to make sure she got off the ship and saw a little fun on Whitefall, such as was available on that rock. They had five days to go ‘till planetfall, baring any of the usual disasters that seemed to be their crapfest destiny. Until then the captain consoled himself with the knowledge that she might be driving everyone crazy but at least she was keeping busy and making any number of little improvements and repairs that needed doin’.

Jayne was also troubled. Somethin’ was nagging at him, irritating him, eluding him. This was not good. Jayne was not built for solving puzzles or cogitatin’ on things. It was what made him good muscle- the ability to react without having to think. Throw a punch, fire a shot, snatch the loot- not because you decided to do it but because that was what you did. A man who slowed down enough to think was dead.

But something was wrong.

Kaylee was upset. She wandered around the ship like an agitated ghost- hammering on this, unscrewing that, opening up panels and examining wires only to close them again. She wasn’t eating much and if the circles under her eyes were any indication she wasn’t sleepin’ much either. And every time he tried to talk to her about it, the gor

Comments
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 01:31
Curse Simon and his timing! Absolutely cannot wait to see where this is heading... cannot wait.
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 01:49
Gorramit! Simon!

Ahh this is great. You're tearing my heart iut here. Poor Jayne and Kaylee. Stupid Simon!

I can't wait for more of this!
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 03:28
Oh Simon!

You don't want her, but no one else can have her either?

Cause that's what it's starting to look like. GRRRR.

I love how touching Jayne made Kaylee the steadiest she's been in days. *sighs*

Keep 'em coming!
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 03:47
You do know that a double dose of this only makes me crave more?

There's some really great character interaction goin' on in here. I love that Simon is picking up on the little things just like us Jaylee fans do.

More. Soon.
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 05:35
I really like how you're taking it slow, and playing Simon and Jayne against each other.. write faster!!!
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 12:46
More, more. I'm really enjoying this story.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 22:01
I agree with RinnyPJ!! "I love how touching Jayne made Kaylee the steadiest she's been in days. *sighs*"

Your killing me here and I love it. Keep 'em coming.
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 22:06
I was the last Anonymous..stupid campus computer.

And I must say the imagery of Jayne putting his fist through Simon’s face and out the back side of his skull filled me with a fierce king of pleasure. *sigh* that’s my man.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 10 November 2005 04:52
Hate Simon. Hate hate. Love the Jaylee, though!!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 11 November 2005 00:15
I'm getting the withdrawal twitches...need an update... I'm fading fast..... but my lurve for this story is eternal
Friday, 11 November 2005 17:26
never thought i'd see the day where i hated simon...an' yet here i am

damn doctors!!! always gettin' in the gorram way of things!!!

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ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 01:23
ARRRRRGGGH! Ok, now i have the urge to put my fist through Simon's face, too, and I'm a pretty big Simon-Kaylee advocate, but every once in a while, you gotta root for the teddy bear. :) This is a great story developing; can't wait for the next installment - possibly adressing the reactions of the rest of the crew, who, of course, know!

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