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In the Dust of the Day

Sunday, November 20, 2005

Sequel to "In the Dirt of the Day." Mal and Inara struggle to make a life together, older and... wiser?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2450    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Note: This is really a continuation of "In the Dirt of the Day" more than a sequel. Thanks so much for all the comments!

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The first time she came into his house it smelled of roasting vegetables and herbs. “You cook,” she said, hanging her coat by the door. His was there, patched brown leather. Her fingers caught a fold.

“Gotta eat,” Mal said. One of his hands crept around her waist, his mouth in her hair. Inara smiled. “Guess you got someone to do that for you though.”

“Well I can hardly cook for thirty people,” Inara said, turning in the circumference of his arm. Their breaths mingled. He tasted of earth now, of things deeply planted.

“Can I have a tour?” she asked. He broke away, shrugging.

“Not much to see.”

The big house next door he and Zoe had built a few years ago to accommodate a growing boy, a couple farm hands. Room enough for him, Zoe had said, but he liked to stay apart, liked his solitude. Privacy, he called it. Inara looked around at the dusty corners of the room. When they first settled, they’d lived in two rooms, he and Zoe and little Wash. Jayne, luckily for all of them given the space, had just been called away to his sick mother. All the money, what little they had, had gone into the farm. On warm nights, Mal used to sleep on Serenity just to get out of the cramped space. Now it was only him though, the front room for cooking and eating and living, and a side room for sleeping. Inara wandered through without asking, peeking into his bedroom. Strange to recognize things: a chair, his worn bedspread.

“Tain’t much,” Mal said stiffly, eyes on her.

“But it’s yours,” Inara replied softly, turning back to him. One of her hands rested on the frame of the door, the wood he had harvested and cut and planed, its grain rough and real.

“Suppose so.” He gave nothing away, she thought, even now. In her bed he had smiled like a younger man, time erased from their skin by the sun through the window. He stepped toward her, said, “We better eat ‘fore it

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 20 November 2005 06:16
Yay!!! Lurve it!!!!!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 20 November 2005 07:00
This was lovely. I enjoyed watching them going through their life, you took the time to tell the story and I loved that. You stayed true to the characters and I could believe that this could ends that way.And the name you picked for their daughter was perfect. Thank you

'They lay still in her wide bed, counting each other’s breaths' ...wow!
Nin
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 20 November 2005 16:23
more please
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 20 November 2005 18:18
Beautiful!!! I hope you write more!!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 21 November 2005 00:27
*sigh*

Perfect.

Please give us some more...
Monday, 21 November 2005 02:45
very sweet and sad in a way....
Monday, 21 November 2005 10:08
WoW! i like it, never much had thought of an old Inara. Or rather her future, i am glad she is happy here in other shades in other paths she would not be. this path she made happyness, it captures her strength and her weakness. she is human i like it. I like the older mal to, he is healing. he was broken. The whole story is happy, but still a certain sadness stains it. Its from the thought that one day they stoped flying, but perhaps that is the tragidy of our heros, not the death of one or to charaters... but rather the death of their ways. They are no longer flying, they are no longer fighters for freedom, they are humanbeings that have an inevitable end. I love that they can find happyness even when they could no longer fly. Please write more.
-OldSoul
Monday, 21 November 2005 16:43
*loves* xiexie ni

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ANONYMOUS
Friday, 30 December 2005 04:58
I am seriously impressed by this. I don't lie when I say you are the best Mal/Inara writer I've read.
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 01:42
This is one of the best. Thank you.

There is a real epic quality to the Mal/Inara romance. and in real Dr. Zhivago-style I don't think it ever will become "happily ever after" in the conventional sense. Even if the sequels get made or the series is revived, these two will remain at odds until old age tempers them. Phaedra ( in the unfinished 'pillow book' series) has the right idea also.

I love it though and tend to agree with Joss Whedon- thwarted love is the best kind.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 17 February 2006 02:54
Absolutely perfect! I cried.
Thursday, 05 October 2006 17:40
In a way, this seems like the only way they could be together if neither of them compromised. Waiting for Serenity to fall apart and Inara to retire, the old excuse sort of just fall away.

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