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In the Dirt of the Day

Friday, November 18, 2005

Seventeen years post-Serenity old friends meet again, older and earth-bound - M/I

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2512    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Note: The title is from Joanna Newsom's song "Sprout and the Bean". I was thinking about continuing this with more small scenes/fragments if people are interested...

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“I never thought I’d see the day when Malcolm Reynolds kissed the dirt,” she said, standing at the edge of the wide field. She had been watching him for long minutes, the slow and steady movement of the plow, his bent head and graying hair. He had not looked up, not once. Part of her wished to leave it that way, to hold her breath and turn away, so that he would continue forever with the image of another her, a younger self. Seeing him like this was a shock, she could admit that in the privacy of her thoughts — no River now, to invade — and how would he look at her, with the years on her?

She waited until he was close enough to hear, close enough to see, and in the end she stayed, spoke.

He raised his head, wiped sweat off his forehead with the back of his hand, leaving smudges of dirt. He squinted at her for a long moment, his face unreadable. She gazed steadily back, years and years of calm carrying her through this. What did he see? A beautiful woman, still, but no longer young. There were tiny soft creases around her eyes and mouth, in the flesh of her hands. It was cool for spring, and styles were soberer now — none of her old red silks, she wore a wool gown of dark blue, simple and elegant, a heavy shawl wrapped around her torso. She was not the vision she had been. Neither was he.

“I don’t kiss it,” he said finally, voice rusty. “I work it. There’s a difference.”

“I’m sure there is,” she agreed equably, and smiled. He smiled too, and then didn’t. He stepped carefully over the furrows between them, his eyes always on her.

“What brings you to these parts Inara?” he asked. He didn’t say: I never thought I’d see you again. He didn’t say: you look the same. He said, “I didn’t think we had any folks on this ball of dirt with enough to entice a high-class… woman, like yourself.”

She’d been expecting

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 18 November 2005 08:33
OH YOU BEST ADD SOME MORE TO THIS STORY!!!! It is great i love it, your doing a great job!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 18 November 2005 08:34
for got to rate it sorry -OldSoul
Friday, 18 November 2005 08:41
How haunting and bittersweet and so incredibly beautiful! I can't even begin to explain how much I enjoyed your words:) I hope you write many, many more!
Friday, 18 November 2005 09:16
Loved that Zoe named her son after Wash and not surprised they would be with Mal on that moon. Just hope having gone this far Inara takes the final step to admitting what her heart has wanted for so long and then she and Mal can be together like they should be. I am sad though that Inara left it so long that even if they do try to make a go of a relationship they cannot now have children of their own. And Zoe, so well adjusted and wise. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 18 November 2005 10:39
This story is like a hot bath.

Calm, quiet and you want it to never end.

Since it did have to end, you picked the perfect line to do that, though.

A really, really lovely read. I would love to read more of this particular future, even if it already feels complete.
Friday, 18 November 2005 15:30
that was like crying, comforting and kind of painful...but a good kind of painful

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TRISHTHEDISH137
Friday, 18 November 2005 17:29
Sooo Good.
But What about Jayne? you have to write another, so we can find about about Jayne!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 18 November 2005 20:17
Good job! You created an atmosphere with just a few words.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 18 November 2005 22:03
loved the story keep it up!!!
2X2
Saturday, 19 November 2005 05:24
This was lovely. Really nice. Just as hard as ever for our pair, though, a bit more hopeful for their future... Love to see more!
MEDEA
Sunday, 20 November 2005 06:09
Thank you all so much! I did in fact just post more, so please go read it and let me know what you think...
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 21 November 2005 00:20
a work of art
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 16 February 2006 17:27
Beautiful.

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