It took him seventy-three minutes to stand up and walk over to her. Nine dance partners. Ten songs.
The boy in the blue tie had asked her twice.
Seventy-three minutes of feeling his eyes on her. Not minding that they were.
She stopped when she felt him beside her. Her skirt fell against her legs. Swirled out when she turned to him.
She was panting. Still smiling. Her heart was pounding and she was alive. Brought to life like Wash was tonight.
His arms were folded across his chest, making the shoulders of his jacket strain. His sheep’s clothing was about to burst.
He wasn’t looking at her. He was looking around the room. “Ain’t one girl here purdy enough to dance with who ain’t already with someone.”
River looked over her shoulder to follow his eyes.
Kaylee was standing at the buffet table with Simon, laughing. They were eating strawberries.
She looked back at him.
He was looking at her now. “You’ve been with someone since you walked in the door. Got sick a’ waitin’ my turn.”
He cleared his throat.
She smiled.
Then she took his hand.
***
If there was one thing that Jayne knew how to do, it was to kill a man. If there were two, it was to kill a man and to…
Well, the third was how to dance.
Not that refined kind of shuffle-shuffle dance that they taught you in finishin’ school or wherever the doc had gone. Jayne’s dancin’ was the grab an’ swing kind. The fun kind. The kind that brought River up against him real nice an’ made her skirt swing out when she went away again. The kind that made a body feel like they was either flyin’ or fallin’ or both, but it was great either way.
He was pretty certain that more’n a few eyes were on the two of ‘em. Mal an’ Zoe had seen him dance before, but they was the only ones.
An’ he knew he didn’ exactly look like a twinkle toes.
Didn’ seem to surprise River, though. She kept up with him real nice, smilin’ an’ laughin’. She had taken out the comb that was holdin’ her hair back. The way she’d been danc
First off, you've got Wash gone, but not. I love that River feels him back at the party. Alive again.
I just absolutely ADORE your Jayne. I mean, that's him. Completely. I love him. His mixed feelings for River and Kaylee... they just make me what to squeeze him.
I adore the moment when River falls, and she says "I think it's too late for that." The thing I like best about her here, is that she's still a little girl (not too little), but she's got that teenager falling in love vibe going. She's not a reader knowing everything that's going on all around her and I like it.
And Jayne... picking the girl that looks like Kaylee. Really, it should be creepy...but it's not. It's just really, really sad.
I'm still crossing my fingers for more Jayne/Kaylee before it ends all Jayne/River, but even if it doesn't... I love this.
I appreciate the encouragement more than I can say. This fic is getting longer than i had planned, and i'm always worried that people will just give up and stop reading it. Good to know I'm still holding on to some of you!
And yes, Rinny, I was sad at that part, too. I've gotten rediculously attached to everyone and it broke my heart to write that scene. le sigh!
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My heart just breaks for eveyone involved in that last scene. Jayne, River, and Kaylee.
I love your Jayne. You managed to capture his good qualities without stripping the harder less than attractive side away. It's hard to get both of those to show.
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