Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

A Turn to the Right

Sunday, October 30, 2005

A stand-alone sequel to "Last one to Leave, Turn out the Lights." NC-17, like, from the word GO.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 6621    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The physical body of Simon Tam lay prone on his utilitarian bed, but his mind was in a fantastic place.

The mattress was wide and as soft and warm as the body stretched out against his. Kaylee covered Simon’s face, chin and neck in little kisses as he stroked a hand down her side and hip. So euphoric was he in that moment that he did not mind when his hand bumped into the larger, more calloused hand that stroked up Kaylee’s thigh. He did not even care that Jayne was there. In fact, the presence of another man – of that man, specifically – had Simon quite enthralled. Kaylee moaned softly, bringing Simon back to the delectable task at hand. He gazed down as she hooked one leg over his. Jayne’s fingertips gently parted the pink, swollen petals of Kaylee’s lotus blossom and stroked along the glistening skin. Kaylee twitched against Simon as Jayne’s unexpectedly adept fingers found her sensitive pearl. Simon’s entire being resonated with desire as he bowed his head to suck hungrily at Kaylee’s nipples. She writhed almost frenziedly between them as Jayne slipped one, then two thick fingers inside her willing body.

Kaylee’s leg slid higher until her knee was at Simon’s waist. He licked a trickle of sweat from in front of her ear as Jayne locked his eyes with a stare. Jayne did not so much as blink as he repositioned himself slightly and entered Kaylee. He looked at Simon intensely until he was flush inside Kaylee, and only then did he allow the pleasure of her tight, slick core to wash over him and his eyes rolled up and closed. Simon was panting nearly as hard as Kaylee as Jayne thrust slowly, long thrusts that nearly unseated him each time. Kaylee bit her lip to restrain a disappointed noise when he pulled out after only a moment.

It was Simon’s turn to jump with surprise as strong, musk-moistened fingers took hold of his manhood. Though he froze involuntarily, he did not recoil. Simon thrust tentatively into the touch that became a firm grasp. The sensitive head of his cock brushed agains

Comments
Sunday, 30 October 2005 23:31
Hey, I just read this over at firefly's glow. Very nice, me likey. The wresling scene turned out great, I thought, just enough of what was needed.
Tres Hot.
Monday, 31 October 2005 05:39
Okay. My hands are shaking, really, making it gorram hard to type this, but it's gotta be said. I am....stunned. I am MOIST. I am in awe of the storm and the fury of the unabashed flat-out hard-on sex I just saw in driven snow white print on midnight black screen. This kind of writing is what I wish like heck I could write. But after reading it I don't know if I have the heart to even try. You're a master! Now how about telling us all about Jayne's heated-up Simon dream? And maybe some Jayne/Kaylee/Simon for real? I'll bet Kaylee'd be up for it. And we all know Jayne and Simon are locked and loaded. Favorite line: "he would blush and go all over ashamed and embarrassed." Hard to pick a fave, though. All good, all sexy, all painted pretty and lurid pictures in my head.
Monday, 31 October 2005 07:31
Jesus Christ on a bicycle!

GUH! I can't tell you how many times I have read "Light" and wanted TO BEG YOU to write this...Actually, I think I did, but whatever. OMFG! Excellent and now *I'll* be in *MY* bunk (cause I can't take a cold shower without thinking on the first fic, which would lead me to the second again...guh).

::loves you HARD::
Monday, 31 October 2005 10:55
mmmmm...lovely!!

Any chance we'll get a Simon/Jayne/River threesome at some point?
Monday, 31 October 2005 15:21
YOW!!! *leaps back from screen* that was...HOT!!! that was amazing, how do you write stuff like that?!? *glares jealously at screen* wish i could do that

b

p.s. i mean the writing
Tuesday, 01 November 2005 00:33
Dang, no sooner asked for than it appears! That was... um... words fail me. *Appropriate* words, that is ;-)

You really write excellent sex scenes. You do an incredible job making them hot while steering clear of that pesky naming-of-parts problem (I never feel a need to chuckle at your choice of Parts terminology, unlike many, many sex scenes).

Fav bit: “What? I’ve got ashy elbows.” So very Jayne-sounding, and a LOL funny bit quirked in.

Okay--now go post-movie and do that Simon/Kaylee/Jayne story.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 06 November 2005 08:40
Very, very hot!
Sunday, 06 November 2005 22:29
wow...so freakin'' hot. Very well written...think i may be a Simon/Jayne fan now.
Monday, 07 November 2005 05:24
Heh.. I started to read this the other day, and then lost it, and then couldn't remember what it was called, and ... GRRRRRRRRRRRRR!

But all better now. That was tasty! :)
RUSTYADINA
Saturday, 12 November 2005 04:11
That was fantastic!! I've read a lot of fanfic, and a lot of it slash, so I can say with assurance that was the some of the sweetest, hottest, and most amazing writing I've ever read!! Please do keep up the great work!!
SANITYINTERRUPTED
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 14:16
Usually not a m/m type of girl. Kind of stumbled on this one.
Whoops.
Might just have to change my tune..
*blushes*
Wow...
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 12 December 2005 20:56
Absolutely fantastic. "Last One to Leave" has been one of my all-time favorite fics for awhile now and I was hoping we'd get more from you. And this one definitely lived up to my expectations! I don't care which characters you use next, just write some more!!!

Cheers ;)

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