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The Execution of Jayne Cobb (2/4)

Sunday, June 7, 2009

The gunman's life catches up with Jayne when he's convicted of a murder he may not have committed. Can the crew of Serenity save him? Do they want to? Set b/w series & BDM. No primary or serial OCs, my solemn vow.

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Thanks to everyone who left feedback on section 1. Yes, this is a re-posting, in fewer, larger increments, now that the story is complete. You may also have seen it on fanfiction.net under my given name, Mary Kroll. Please enjoy.


There was no friendly truck waiting for the crew of Serenity when they landed again on Janus. It would take several trips on the mule, but there was nothing for it. Jayne was grateful for the focus of the work and the drone of the vehicle as it rumbled to the warehouse and back. Mal had a lecture primed for him, Jayne just knew. Every sidelong glance the captain took in the mercenary's direction promised a high-handed dictum on his behavior, assumably relative to Kaylee and his declaration a few nights since. He was so deliberately fixated on his task that he never noticed the two men watching him from their position across the street, pistols strapped to their thighs.

The bulk of the day was gone before the last crate was deposited in the building and the short stack of wrinkled bills was deposited onto Mal's hand. Jayne and Zoe sat on the back of the mule, waiting, as professional banalities were also exchanged.

“Cobb?” one of the men yelled as he and his partner loped across the street. “Jayne Cobb?”

No sooner had Jayne turned his head but the two had each grabbed him by an arm and hauled him up.

Gun dan!” Arms weary from shifting boxes all day and taken unawares, Jayne's wrists were in cuffs before he knew it.

“Jayne Cobb,” the taller man began, “you are bound by law.”

“Whoa, whoa, whoa, gents,” Mal stepped in front of them, but the shorter man shouldered him out of the way as they muscled Jayne between them. “That's my hired man you're absconding with.”

“See this?” the taller man pointed to a pitted metal badge on his left chest. “This means we're the law and we'll abscond with anyone's hired man we see fit, especially when he beats a man to death in our town.”

“I'm Deputy Lonnie Gibson,” the younger of t

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Sunday, 14 June 2009 20:19
Great chapter! I'll come back and reread when I can spend the time that this story deserves, but I want to applaud your OC Somsri. The way you write her, she is distinctive and sympathetic right away. The exchange between Simon and the doctor was great. Actually, in all the exchanges between the crew and the townspeople, I really felt the crew's frustration and how they are reining themselves in, so as not to upset these petty despots. Zoe and Jayne, each separately telling off Mal, was well done also.

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