Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

QUESTIONS OF THE HEART, PART 1

Saturday, October 22, 2005

When a beautiful friend of Inara's comes to stay on the ship for a few days, Jayne is more then smitten with her...For all you loyal Jaynelovers out there, THIS IS FOR YOU! Although for all the Jaylee lovers out there, this may not settle well w/you guys...This is my first fanfic and my first writing for this type of genre...Go easy on me....Will appreaciate and am looking forward to any kind of feeback, positve and negative...will continue with story if there's enough support for it! Enjoy!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3059    RATING: 7.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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2:45 a.m.

How long had he been lying there already? Letting out an exasperated sigh of discontent, Jayne rolled onto his back, staring blankly up at the ceiling. The soft humming of Serenity's engines reverberated throughout the ship, the gentle thump,thump becoming a soothing lullaby that could've put even the most fussiest of infants to sleep.

Sleep, that's all Jayne wanted...just to close his eyes and let his body drift into the marvelous dreamland he always seemed to find himself in...where luscious, beautiful nymphettes tantalized every bit of his senses...ahh yes...the very thought of it all was enough to bring on a stiff one to break through the zipper on his pants.

But as he lay there, trying to force himself alseep, Jayne knew that happy little head trip was miles away. Pulling the thick wool blanket up around him, Jayne rolled over onto his side, trying his damnest to get comfortable, feeling the firmness of the mattress beneath him.

Soon...soon they would be hitting Lanai. And stepping foot on that wondrous, hustle and bustle of a rock meant getting paid finally.

Damn that Mal...always wantin to do everythin' perfect...why couldn't he have just gone with Brennan Meijer's offer back on Raymer? That son of a bitch was going to offer a handsome sum for everything! Jayne thought then...he didn't know what was worse...going for two weeks without seeing a single credit in his hot little hands or going two weeks without being laid. Had there been a bout of temporary insanity that had seeped unmercifully into his skull when he hooked up with Mal and Zoe in the first place?

There had been days...oh good lord there had been days...days when Jayne found himself wanting to wrap his hands around Mal's neck and just squeeze...just choke the life from him. But then again, there was a certain tenacity Mal possessed, a certain subtle stance that commanded and begot respect. Jayne could readily admit it even if another living soul would never hear him say the exact words, he could give credit where

Comments
Saturday, 22 October 2005 09:32
Good for Jayne! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 23 October 2005 03:44
i must see where this goes
Sunday, 23 October 2005 04:33
Excellent first fic. I know your stomach musta been in knots when you first took the plunge and copied it into the Firefly.net box. Feels like you're on a big stage with a huge audience holding their breath, doesn't it? But you did GOOD here! I really like how you got Jayne's voice down. And the new light o' love sounds like a promising connection. We've gotta have more, if you're willing. And if you ever want a beta for your fic, please consider me. E-mail it to me at Four-Foot-Hair@hotmail.com
Sunday, 23 October 2005 13:32
aaw, jayney gets some love...maybe. well, here's hopin'!!!

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Sunday, 23 October 2005 21:25
To Everyone that has posted comments: Thank you so much!!! I'm glad someone is reading this!!! And yes, Jayne needs wuv too...(and let me tell of of ya'll, I would be more than willin' to give it to him too....) Keep the comments coming! The second chapter is on it's way!!!!
PrincessNip
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Wednesday, 25 January 2006 07:27
I have read alot of stories that you have wrote and I think you get better everytime you write. You need to keep on this story you are doing a great job.
Your husband Frank
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Wednesday, 25 January 2006 07:28
I have read alot of stories that you have wrote and I think you get better everytime you write. You need to keep on this story you are doing a great job.
Your husband Frank

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