Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

QUESTIONS OF THE HEART PART 4

Friday, November 4, 2005

Jayne gets a little worked up...and River adds her insight...

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Mal sighed to himself. It wasn’t what he wanted to hear. He had been really hoping to make it to Lanai by evening at the latest. The last thing he wanted was to miss that drop off. Gorram! Except for the pipes bursting and the thermostat coil needing replaced, it really had been an uneventful trip, just the kind he liked. No complications.

“We have to do it, Mal” Wash said to him, picking up on his captain’s blatant discontent. “If the Alliance were to stop us for a routine check…,” Wash began, his voice trailing off, his face scrunching up at the mere thought of it.

“I know…I know…” Mal replied quickly. “None of us will be seein’ sunlight anytime soon.”

“That loot…it ain’t exactly legal…someone’s missing their precious antiques very much, I’m sure.” Wash replied.

Mal nodded his head in agreement. The view in front of him was magnificent. So many times, when the rest of the crew were fast asleep, Mal would come and sit, just to gaze out, letting the serene calm wash through him, and cleanse his inner most thoughts. He was home. Watching those celestial beings of gas, shining their energy so bright, and peering out into the open vastness that would never be controlled and conquered was something Mal never grew tired of. Never. It was true. There was no other place he wanted to be…

“You’re sure Alliance radar will pick us up?”

“I’m positive, Mal. I checked the scans today and the whole outer area around Lanai is hot...but if we go the long way,” Wash explained, pointing to a lit up screen in front of him with a long pointer on it. “If we circle around instead of taking a direct path, we’ll avoid them…and the headaches.”

“How long?” Mal asked.

Wash shrugged. Pushing a few calculations into the system, he waited until he heard the sharp beep, beep sound that meant the calculations were finished.

“Two days.” Wash said.

“Those thermostat coils have to be replaced…anywhere close we can land tonight?” Mal asked then.

Pushing more figures quickly into the system, Wash nodded. “Looks like the only

Comments
Friday, 04 November 2005 18:17
Excellent, loved Jayne in this and the playful joshing from Wash and Mal made it all feel like family. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
BELLONA
Friday, 04 November 2005 22:33
“What’s even better is being in love with a beautiful woman who can kick the daylights out of you and have you enjoy it…now that’s a woman!”

nipnip strikes again!!!

b
Saturday, 05 November 2005 06:59
I'm loving this part at the beginning: "peering out into the open vastness that would never be controlled and conquered was something Mal never grew tired of. Never. It was true. There was no other place he wanted to be…" Sweet strong Mal seeing a mirror of himself out in the black 'Verse. Nice work.

For the rest of the fic, gorram it all to hell,Baby Girl! You're taking us places I know we need to go and ain't nobody can take us there quite like you. I like the pinpoint laser accuracy of the crew's voices and moves. Mal and Wash ribbing Jayne in the kitchen, their gestures: Mal's body leaning up against Jayne's chair as he ragged on him about his having a girlfriend, then how sadly wrong it all turned out when Sonja only caught the end of what Jayne was saying to 'Nara... good twist. You're a master at that shite.

Loved the dancing 'round the bonfire, banjos singing. Excellent command of crews' voices here again, everyone right as rain. Joy turning into watchful fearfulness when the drunken lout grabbed Sonja. You waited a beat for Jayne to notice, and my oh my, when he NOTICED! That's our Boy! Finally, Mal stepping up to help Jayne hyper down, not sending the creep to his dirt nap, giving Jayne's victim the following helpful info: "bein’ couped up will do stuff to a man…get’s em’ all wrong in the head…ain’t that right, Jayne?” Mal said, his voice chipper and wrongfully delighted."

Oh my sweet Buddha! You've got a handle on this whole thing, and a firm hand it is! Please just keep doing what you're doing. And I'll keep hoping there's some hot monkey love near the end of this tale. Not that I'm in a hurry, or anything. Make it last. You do it so very well!
Monday, 28 November 2005 18:13
I just re-read this and found another great line by Mal:

“I know…I know…” Mal replied quickly. “None of us will be seein’ sunlight anytime soon.”

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