Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

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Wednesday, August 10, 2005

Mal has another one of his barroom confrontations.

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Bobby Denton slammed the captain into the bar. While it wasn’t the most cunning plan Mal had conceived, it did have all the elements that were easy to apply. Coming into town, the trio hit up the bar with the intention of finding some of the Denton clan.

Unusually busy for a morning at the bar (all the previous night’s drunks were curiously up and about, if groggy and unalert), there was indeed some hitting and some finding. Mal thought it convenient that he was doing both to the same man.

There was a priceless consigned look on Simon’s face that Mal caught just after he opened up the lines of communication.

Communication had consisted of the captain walking up to the Bobby Denton and knocking a curious look to the floor. The previous nights’ tenants were more than happy to join in and perpetuate the brawl.

“Had enough, Reynolds?”

“Not quite,” Mal thought it convenient that some object on the bar was glass and filled with beer just within his out

Comments
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 23:46
Reality's overrated.
Thursday, 11 August 2005 04:53
As Mal would say...."Huh."

Very interesting.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 11 August 2005 12:39
Great, but what a place to leave it.
Thursday, 11 August 2005 16:44
Oooh, creepifying for poor Simon but mesmerising as well, gorrammit! Can't wait to see what happens next. Shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 14 August 2005 01:56
Not a problem:) Glad to help good fic reach the masses (and moi) faster:)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 19 August 2005 18:09
More Simon! I don't really care about Mal and the getting the ship back part of the plot, I admit. I just want Simon's hallucinations and thoughts and such - that's the really interesting part of this story.

Why did you have leave it there!?
Friday, 26 August 2005 00:25
I have enjoyed this series. Well written and charactization is great.

When will the next chapter be coming?
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 06 October 2005 01:23
Damm that is good stuff. Very well realised Simon, loving his hallucinations. Must Write More!!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 26 October 2005 19:43
Please write more, you can't leave it there, this is the kind of torture that creates reavers. more, more must have more to read...argh.

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