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Friday, May 6, 2005

Pair up. Where's River?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3576    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Honest Run: Detail

Honest Run: Detachment

Honest Run: Diagnosis

Honest Run: Dance

Honest Run: Dignity

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There was a beep in Inara’s shuttle. For a moment, Inara paused. Usually, if someone from the ship wanted to tell her something of interest, there would be a pleasant knock on the shuttle door. Mal took exception to this, but he was the only one. The console chimed again before the companion edged over to it, guiding the curtains aside as she did so, “This is Inara.”

“Inara,” Zoe came in over the com in the shuttle, “Look out for River. She’s had one of her episodes…”

“Is she alright?” Inara held down the button, “What happened?”

“Honey, stress ‘non-violent’ episode,” Wash came in over the com, “It’s a warning, not a warning, you see?”

“That made absolutely no sense, Wash.”

“It’s kind of a code peach versus a code yellow,” Wash continued, “A look out, but not…”

“You almost had me at the code peach idea,” Zoe interrupted edgily.

Inara smiled in spite of herself. To spite the increasingly serious mood that Zoe was in, Wash was responding with a more… upbeat attitude. Its effects were… undetermined.

“Honey…” Wash said.

Despite Zoe’s exasperations, Wash still remained at her side… Inara couldn’t figure out whether she was enduring his attention, or desperately needing it.

“Dear,” There was some deep marital sighing, “Fine. Whatever. Why don’t you just tell her?”

“Fine, I will.” Wash said, “Inar

Comments
Friday, 06 May 2005 07:04
Apologies all...

I try to do a month to month thing, but it didn't pan out this time.

Computer problems. There was ill money spent and much manly crying...

Wisdom may have been gained, but coming back a step behind where you were hardware wise(power supply, HD, cd/dvd rom, RAM...) is still hard to take.

Anyway, I've been slaving over this since. Hope you enjoy.

Suggestion box below(and I love to get 'em...)

Footnote: When I started this, I had no idea that Jayne would get as much word time as he has, but here it is...

Keep flyin'

And again,

Apologies.
Friday, 06 May 2005 09:36
OMG. Inara *stunned*

woah.
Friday, 06 May 2005 12:34
I really like how this story is developing and especially loved the bit at the end with River trying to tell Inara she needed to confide in Simon. That gave me a real glimmer of hope that her brother could save Inara, him being Top Three Per Cent and all. Very fine fic, hope the next chapter is not so long coming. Shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 06 May 2005 16:26
Worth the wait.

Poses several questions, doesn't it? The one at the front of my mind: Is River (consciously or subconsciously) tweaking our favorite merc, or can the crew still count on him to shoot first and not ask questions later? Hmmm.

Friday, 06 May 2005 16:30
This is... Terrific! The dialogue is spot on, and I love the attention you are paying to some of the crew that we just don't get enough of. Thanks a bunch, ya made my day.
Friday, 06 May 2005 22:38
Great, really love to see the development of what is going on in the ship...though i think I missed an episode. Not that I won't enjoy rereading the entire thing.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 06 May 2005 23:36
BC here:

Oh, River knows that Inara is sick.
That should be interesting.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 07 May 2005 09:27
Oh my god, this is the best gorramn series EVER! I have been trying to figure out a way to get more of my friends into FF fanfic, thank you for providing that lever. This series is _perfect_ for reintroducing people who haven't seen the show in a while. I can't wait for the rest of it.
MAI
Monday, 09 May 2005 04:38
Beautiful. Absolutely great writing. Just one tiny suggestion. Don't Kill Simon! OR Inara! Oh, right your ideas your plot, please write more soon. Really, really soon. Like now.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 23 May 2005 13:04
Great, excelent, the characters are just perfectly right,

but the SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!
you left mal with a terminally(?) Ill simon months ago. and now Inara's life may depend on simon,
Monday, 06 June 2005 22:42
very good series, hope to see more soon.

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