Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
“So that’s what we have people…”
Zoe surveyed the faces around the table. Each one of them carried a different emotion from Jayne’s incredulous smirk to River’s distant stare. Zoe tried not to stare overmuch in River’s direction, as her reaction was the most unsettling. The girl had that way about her that suggested that she knew most of what would happen before it gone that direction. That, Zoe decided, would be handy to have on their side if they could just find some way to harness it.
But now, it was just enough to give her the shivers.
“What??” Jayne jeered first, “The captain in trouble,” there was a look of contrived astonishment, “Not our Mal…”
The new passenger looked on from the kitche
Comments
Thursday, 26 October 2006 09:50
A little short for good faith. Leave yon comments, questions and accusations...
AWINDSOR
Thursday, 26 October 2006 14:40
Hysterical.... "What happens if you enjoy any of this?" "Pain?"
Brilliant. A lovely chemistry, excellent grasp of character.
Brilliant. A lovely chemistry, excellent grasp of character.
Thursday, 26 October 2006 17:36
Lovely character interaction. I'm looking forward to reading more.
I certainly hope Simon doesn't die.
Kaylee nursing him back to health would be fine and dandy too. . . :)
I certainly hope Simon doesn't die.
Kaylee nursing him back to health would be fine and dandy too. . . :)
Saturday, 28 October 2006 06:41
Oh...it was short but freaking brilliant when it came to dialogue and character intereaction:D
Though I think I will have to go back and re-read the preceding chapters. I am a tad lost as to the plot:(
BEB
Though I think I will have to go back and re-read the preceding chapters. I am a tad lost as to the plot:(
BEB
Saturday, 28 October 2006 18:02
I liked this immensely and am anxiously waiting for the Big Gorram Rescue! And please don't let Simon die or the Captain. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 30 October 2006 00:42
Yay, just noticed you started writting again was starting to give up hope that I'd ever find out what happens next. Altough am a bit confused when did serenity find out about simon's condition, may have to reread the eariler chapters.
Monday, 30 October 2006 21:10
Jack is most definitely back!!
WOW! Excellent character voices.
Like the others, I'm going to have to go back a re-read the other chapters.
Good t'see you again Jack.
WOW! Excellent character voices.
Like the others, I'm going to have to go back a re-read the other chapters.
Good t'see you again Jack.
Thursday, 18 January 2007 11:15
why do twits like you keep us in supense hurry up and finish the sentence your on and get it posted
DONG MA!
DONG MA!
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