Games People Play
Sunday, June 12, 2005
PORN***PORN***PORN***PORN***PORN
NC-17, het, W/Z
Note: I creeped myself out writing this, so just imagine how you’ll feel reading it.
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 5733
RATING: 8.0 (NC17)
SERIES: FIREFLY
Please, please, please leave feedback, no matter what you thought.
“Something about that is just downright unsettling.” – Jayne Cobb
Zoe had certain incontrovertible ways of letting her husband know what she wanted. This was one of those ways. Wash descended the ladder into their bunk and had to blink twice to be completely sure of what he was seeing. Illuminated only by the bedside lamp, Zoe sat cross-legged on the head of the bed with the blanket up to her waist, bent over a book whose cover showed considerable wear from many readings. Her hair was loosely plaited in thick braids that fell one over each shoulder, connecting with the line of the thin straps of her baby-doll nightie. Its pale peach color charmed Wash with the way it made Zoe’s bronze skin glow so warmly. She looked up at him, smiled and waved.
Wash knew what Zoe wanted. This was one of her games, her idea from the very beginning. It was one of their most immersive games and, he had learned, the more intense the play, the more satisfying the results. It was all right that Wash did not share this particular kink of his wife’s – if anything, he had a Zoe fetish. “Whatcha reading, baby?”
“My unicorn book.” Zoe leaned over to give Wash a peck on the cheek as he sat next to her to unlace his boots. “You wanna read it with me?” she asked in a light, nearly effervescent voice.
“I sure would.” Wash swung his legs up onto the bed and Zoe snuggled against his side as he took the book and put his arm around her. She giggled as he made a dramatic presentation of clearing his throat. “Okay, where are we?”
Zoe poked at the open page, “Here, after the third spell.”
“Okay. ‘My dear, you deserve the services of a great wizard, but I'm afraid you'll have to be glad of the aid of a second-rate pickpocket.’” As Wash read on, inflecting the dialogue with different voices, his hand slid down Zoe’s bare arm. His fingers crept along the sensitive underside of one soft breast. The skillful way his fingertips stroked across her nip
Monday, 13 June 2005 05:27
I like it. Very erotic and tantalizing. I always imagined that Zoe had a masochistic streak within her, and I imagine Wash must be having a ball with all of it.
And I especially like the last bit with Jayne and Mal. Godd to see even the most sex crazed of the crew members be a bit prudish.
If you don't mind, I wouldn't mind seeing Simon and Kaylee getting in on some of that action.
Tuesday, 14 June 2005 06:45
Adult-consensual-married... took away the 'creep' factor for me. Well written. Wash seemed well in character, Zoe somewhat less so (but that was sort of the point). Liked Jayne at the end, too.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 17 June 2005 17:28
You got a smutty mind, WildHeaven (which ain't always a bad thing!). Good use of language and imagery; it was all manner of.. um, well...urk. I'll be in my bunk!!
BlueBomber (who is too lazy to sign in right now)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 19 June 2005 23:18
O.O
yeah....creepy.
and on the flip side, yeah, I admit I've read quite a few of these, this is one of the better ones I've rread in a while.
-NinjaKat (who wasn't really here. Cause he's a ninja, ya know?)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 01 July 2005 08:39
Good Gawd. I was in the mood for a good PWP and this hit the spot (yeah, that one).
Now, if only the entire ship had been off doing "stuff"...or each other. *big grin*
--bugchicklv (too tired to sign in now)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 04 July 2005 01:30
oh my....popsicle.
A nice little PWP.
Sunday, 24 July 2005 03:33
"Wash pulled his hand out, dragging his yolk-calloused palm"???
How do you get yolk-calloused palms??
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 31 July 2005 07:00
Gotta give this a 10 for creativity, exquisite knowledge of how the characters could and would think and react, and for the moisture-index reading this produced in me. Shiney I got! One of my fave lines is "Had Zoe seen the grin on Wash’s face, as evil as any the Devil had ever drawn on a man," but many others were equally noteworthy. Just my observation here: It seems to me like Zoe may have been sexually abused by her daddy so the loveplay in this vignet could be showing a darker side to the life Zoe and Wash have together. Not that Wash is at fault for catering to or promoting the past abuse, but I got a creepy feeling all the same. That did NOT take away from the arousal here in my chair, you understand. Thanks for a great story. Can't wait for Serenity to hit theaters soon.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 31 July 2005 07:01
P.S. Yolk caloused palms probably refers to Wash's exertitions at the yoke of the ship's controls. That's how I read it. Just a slight word confusion. Does that help? I'm not the gifted writer here, of course, but that's my take on yolk=yoke. Loved the story, see my at-length comments above. Thanks again.
Sunday, 31 July 2005 16:20
CLARAMATA
Friday, 09 September 2005 05:10
Wow, okay, a little bit squick-worthy, but good
Sunday, 09 October 2005 05:35
Hiya WildHeavenFarm. The stranger is "ItsaWash" or "Roving Eye", (me) lover of shiny fanfic in the Blue Sun Room. Your tale above is gorram golden. Yeah, its direction is a bit creepifyin', but that don't take away from the quality of the piece, nor the fact that the angle is interestin', nor the fact that it reaches quite a nice high titillation meter. :0) More, more, please. Especially now...when we all need more Wash.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 10 October 2005 03:48
Oh my gosh!! The thing I liked the most about it was that she's reading the Last Unicorn! It was a great story, depicting the sexual endeavors of a loving married couple. :-)
Sunday, 30 October 2005 06:46
Wow, Zoe has a Daddy Complex, who else here is not surprised? No, but seriously, great fic, loved the end, was only mildly creepifying.
Tuesday, 24 January 2006 11:15
LOVED IT!
Also I realised you were quoting "The Last Unicorn" I used to have that on tape, It was my favorite too, lol.
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