Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Captain Doctor (part 4)

Saturday, May 28, 2005

Summary: AU—instead of losing the Battle of Serenity, the Independents won, extending the course of the war. Takes place around the same time as the series, six years after the First Battle of Serenity on Hera.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2913    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

Captain Doctor

By

KMS

kmspider@aol.com

http://hometown.aol.com/kmspider/myhomepage/index.html

Summary: AU—instead of losing the Battle of Serenity, the Independents won, extending the course of the war. Takes place around the same time as the series, six years after the First Battle of Serenity on Hera.

& & & & &

* * * * * * *

Chapter 4

* * * * * * *

‘Oh, diyu,’ Jayne thought. Zoe was gonna kill him. And if she didn’t, the Sarge was likely to just as soon as he woke up.

Jayne hadn’t taken much of liking to the doc when he’d first seen him. Too clean. Too rich smelling. Too Alliance. But having the boy stand up for himself when Jayne had wanted to muddy his face had earned a bit of Jayne’s respect. And seeing that pretty face looking back at him like a raccoon had been worth the small show of defiance. Turned out the doc was good for a laugh.

Standing there holding a lamp for the doc while he’d rummaged around peoples’ insides hadn’t hurt either. Boy knew what he was doing, and had shed his scared ways like a cloak when he worked, instead becoming sure of himself and softly giving instructions to those helping out, and layering on gentle praise where it would do the most good. Made people want to do as he asked.

Jayne had shifted off of lantern duty three times before Zoe had ordered him to finally go back to pick up the boy and put him to bed. The 2IC had been right, boy was dead on his feet. It was almost funny to watch him being so easily led. Reminded him of a pretty toy his youngest sister had when she was just a kid. You could flex its leg, elbows and knees, and the toy would stay in that position. Doc, after twelve hours of surgery, was just like that. Push the protein near his face and he suddenly remembered how to eat. Push him over, and his eyes closed automatically. Just like the doll.

Now that he thought on it, seemed the doll’s eyes were the same color as the doc’s, too.

And now he’d up and lost him. To Commander Early, of all people. How the

Comments
Saturday, 28 May 2005 17:10
Very much loving this. I just knew our BDMs would go and rescue Simon. Yay! The description of the cell reminded me of an oubliette. Can't wait to see what happens next. I have an idea who the old soldier is going to be and am so enjoying the journey. "Xie xie ni", Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
NIXAJANE
Saturday, 28 May 2005 18:36
This is such an awesome story. I love the way you've found a place in the AU for all of the characters, and everything is coming together. :-)
Saturday, 28 May 2005 18:57
Ok, maybe I've been reading too much slash, but Jayne and Simmon seem to be awful close in this series. And I like it! This is really good, a nice picture of war. Are Kaylee and Inara ever gonna show up?
Saturday, 28 May 2005 22:09
Great story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next. In fact, I'm beginning to check the site for updates a little too frequently, all because I'm looking forward to reading more!

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.