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Captain Doctor (part 2)

Thursday, May 26, 2005

Summary: AU—instead of losing the Battle of Serenity, the Independents won, extending the course of the war. Takes place around the same time as the series, six years after the First Battle of Serenity on Hera.

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Captain Doctor

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KMS

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Summary: AU—instead of losing the Battle of Serenity, the Independents won, extending the course of the war. Takes place around the same time as the series, six years after the First Battle of Serenity on Hera.

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Chapter 2

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Alliance Facility, Location Unknown:

Off in a far corner of the complex that housed River Tam, a lone transcription clerk looked over the scribbled notes that she was to enter into the system.

Scratching her head over some of the erratic writing, she failed to notice her own clerical error, a simple spelling mistake that, for some reason, her own computer system had been re-designed to overlook.

Redesigned, mind you, by the same genius whose notes the clerk was transcribing.

River Tam had noticed that within the last three months, any messages this particular clerk transcribed had failed to correct a simple series of letters. The faint, delighted squeal in the hallway between two clerks about an engagement revealed the reason.

It had struck River's whimsy to use the addition of the clerk's new engagement ring, which caused her to double the letter 'o' whenever she made certain entries, to her own advantage.

Knowing the little clerk's ordinary typing skills, River had, meticulous piece by meticulous piece, built an incredible worm virus (unnoticed by all who had seen the pieces) that would, in two months time, attack all communications system on Londonium and render them useless for forty-eight hours.

While the Alliance would see this as an attack from rebel forces, the loss of supplies during that sensitive period would guarantee the loss of the planet Hera, and signal the end of the war.

A small salute to her brother would free them both from the heel of the Alliance for all time.

So it was that, by design, and the weight of a stone, when the little clerk typed the letters 'bob' it always came out 'boob'.

Only fitting, Rive

Comments
MAI
Thursday, 26 May 2005 07:16
Very sneaky one, River. I really love your take on the firefly 'verse. Can't wait to see how you introduce the other characters into the plot. Great work!
Thursday, 26 May 2005 09:38
Very good. I never really thought about what would happen if the Independents had won. I guess I just thought the war would be over, but apparently not according to you.
Can't wait to read more!!

No Power In The Verse
XOXOX-FREDIKAYLLOW-XOXOX
Thursday, 26 May 2005 14:06
Shiny take on the Alt'verse! Interesting how Jubal became a cog in the machine..... I guess that explains the need to use psyche warfare.

Keep flyin'

K
Thursday, 26 May 2005 19:54
Very good and very much crying out for more. I love this version of Simon, still managing to project a sense of goodness and purpose no matter what side he is on. But who is the spy? I am hoping it isn't Monty. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 06 December 2005 16:42
wow i cant wait to see how the other characters fit in.
SUSANAH
Saturday, 10 February 2007 00:15
I love the chess metaphor. Simon is more of a "white" knight as opposed to the other's darker view of the 'verse. Jayne seems nicer than the one I'm used to in the series.

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