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Captain Doctor (part 6 of 6)

Monday, May 30, 2005

Summary: AU-instead of losing the Battle of Serenity, the Independents won, extending the course of the war. Takes place around the same time as the series, six years after the First Battle of Serenity on Hera.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3026    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Captain Doctor

By

KMS

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Summary: AU-instead of losing the Battle of Serenity, the Independents won, extending the course of the war. Takes place around the same time as the series, six years after the First Battle of Serenity on Hera.

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Chapter 6

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Simon found himself huddled behind a meager pile of fallen bricks, Sergeant Reynolds by his side, sidearm out and ready.

Around them, he could see the rest of Reynolds' band, hiding among the rubble, too. At a hand signal from the sergeant, they headed out, moving south, swiftly and silently.

"Reynolds, you traitor, you bring that Purplebelly in, and we'll see to it that your people don't spend any time in the brig," a deep voice carried to them.

Reynolds ignored the voice, pushing Simon ahead of him. When Simon's crouch wasn't low enough, a shot clipped the stones around him, sending brick chips at them. Reynolds hand landed on Simon's hair and pushed him lower.

"Best keep your head down, Doc, iffn you want to keep it."

Simon smothered a cough and nodded.

Silently Reynolds pointed out Zoe's hiding place. "I want you to head over there. Stay low and Zoe'll get you home while we hold these boys off."

Simon nodded again, and as Reynolds popped up to deliver deadly cover fire, Simon raced toward Zoe. He was halfway there when a grenade went off not a dozen feet away from him, the concussion enough to knock him off his feet. He landed in a small hollow, his ears ringing.

Blinking up at the sky, he lay stunned a moment, until a shadow loomed over him. Zoe's mouth was open, yelling at him, but he couldn't hear anything above the buzz. He gazed stupidly up at her for a split second before she was tugging at his shoulder. Getting his mind working again, he rolled over, letting her pull him to his knees and forward. They stumbled and dashed to her former hiding place before she released him, letting him collapse against the embankment.

Comments
Monday, 30 May 2005 08:56
'That it was manly and impulsive'
'Yes, but I believe it sounded more like- Don't do it again'
Oh, so you you did manage to fit a little bit of Inara in there.
Very good. I really enjoyed this. I hope it's no the end. I would definitely like to see more from Captain Doctor. Perhaps with Kaylee and Inara in there this time...

No Power In The Verse
XOXOX-FREDIKAYLLOW-XOXOX
Monday, 30 May 2005 11:06
This was brilliant, excellent and very much entertaining. Loved the banter and actually wanted to cheer when that two-timing double-crossing piece of *fei hua* Tracey betrayed them. Loved the rescue of Simon by our Big Damn Heroes just as Book swoops in to reclaim his man. Really like how this new twist on the story sets up the future for Serenity in a whole new way. Looking forward to the next set of stories when you get them meeting up and beginning their new adventures in the verse. Very shiny, *xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 30 May 2005 11:08
Um, meant to say I wanted to cheer when Tracey got killed by his own side for double crossing our heroes. My fingers just didn't type in all the words before I hit submit. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
MAI
Tuesday, 31 May 2005 09:14
This is an excellent story. I hope there's a sequel to come soon?
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 31 May 2005 17:01
Wheeee! I wanted to shoot Tracey my own self! That was really good, and it defintitely deserves a sequel.
Thursday, 02 June 2005 14:45
Another shiny rendition of the AU with the BDH coming out on top!! I guess Tracy is a weasel no matter where you find him!!

Looking forward to the next installment, say a few years after the war ......on Persephone perhaps?

Keep flyin',


K
Sunday, 27 November 2005 18:12
I just found this story today and read it straight through. Gosh darned fine piece of work! A good read. Thanks so for sharing it. All the characters were delightfully in-character and played their roles so very well in the AU action. Especially good was the cheerful, not-defeated-at-Serenity Mal you wrote. First rate.
Monday, 03 April 2006 19:52
very impressive. couldn't stop reading.
Sunday, 14 May 2006 18:04
I really like these alternative takes on the 'verse. This was really good. Think thats there room for a second series.
Friday, 20 October 2006 21:18
Enjoyed the story immensly. Would love to see a follow up story.

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