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All By Myself- Chapter 3

Saturday, May 21, 2005

Someone has taken Kaylee, but will Cam reveal what he knows in time?

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Disclaimer- As before, I don't own Firefly, but alot of the stuff here is mine.

Dedicated to IdiotChild- the inspiration behing Cas.

All By Myself

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Chapter 3

Six Weeks Earlier

Kaylee had been down to the planet for supplies. Brego was one of those planets that put little emphasis on personal hygiene, so Inara didn’t even bother looking for clientele. Although Mal and Simon were both worried about Kaylee being down there by herself, they eventually caved under her sweet smile and let her go down. Mals only proviso was that she take a gun, to protect herself from the ruffians down there.

She had so much fun down on Brego. Two days of shopping for new parts for Serenity, as well as buying a few small pressies for the crew with some left over money from their last job. Finally she had all she needed, including a brand new compression coil, sorely needed. She took the shuttle back up to Serenity, and was vaguely confused when she approached the ship. The power appeared to be out inside. By the looks of it, auxiliary life support was still working, no lights were on inside. Kaylee was intrigued by this mystery, and hurried to get parked back home. As she opened the doors of Shuttle 2 a disgusting odour met her nose, causing her to cough and wretch. She covered her nose with her shirt and commenced a search of the ship. The power was down, so she grabbed a flashlight from the table in the galley and turned it on. No sign of anyone in the galley, the bridge, any of the bunks and the engine room. Kaylee descended the stairs and explored the passenger dorms. She found the infirmary in disarray, syringes and bandages strewn across the floor. Kaylee felt so scared. The missing crew, Serenity abandoned and that revolting smell all pointed towards… Kaylee didn’t even know what. She felt lost; she didn’t know what to do. She wandered into the cargo bay and swayed as a fresh wave of nausea hit her. At first she was speechless; there were no words to describe what she saw. Then

Comments
Saturday, 21 May 2005 16:33
Please, please review. let me know what you think of my directionless tale. And any hint or tips are more than welcome.

No Power In The Verse
XOXOX-FREDIKAYLLOW-XOXOX
Saturday, 21 May 2005 19:30
I must admit, it is quite clever of you to use this sort of timeline. I've never been much for future fics, but I'm really enjoying this one.
Saturday, 21 May 2005 23:47
Not so directionless. You have set up an interesting and PAINFUL tale. Of course we all want to know what the *&^% happened.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 June 2005 00:54
Ah! Very well written, but so not fair! I mean, they're gone, dead, never coming back! *cries* I'll keep reading anyway though, it's intruiging i wanna know what happened
Saturday, 04 June 2005 07:24
This is a pretty dark tale but I am along for the ride to see where you go with it.

Reading some of your earlier stories you seem to sure like tragady.
Friday, 17 June 2005 14:04
Oh JB!!
What are you doing to me. Where is part 4, I believe I speak for everyone here when I BEG for more.
I know that somewhere in your clever little noggin, you know where you are going. Go for it!
I like the crazy timeline, slowly revealing bits and pieces. Poor Kaylee.

----- Idiotchild
Friday, 17 June 2005 14:05
Misery loves company!
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 02:12
PLEASE POST MORE!

I am NOT one for tragedy!fics, but this one just hooked its claws in. I think your "directionless" fic has promise!

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