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I'll Never Forget

Friday, April 8, 2005

What If...Bryan Frye reflects on the life of hs daughter.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3762    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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I'll Never Forget

I’ll never forget the day the day the Lord brought her into our lives.

That tiny sunshiny baby, such a little morsel of a being that I just had to hold her in my arms and protect. She was our sixth and final child, and Heaven knows I spoiled her to no end. She frightened us half to death that day though. She wasn’t supposed to arrive for another couple of weeks. So when her mamma went into labour, needles to say I panicked. I rushed around, rounding up all the kids to usher along to Doctor Baker’s office. Until my wife, who had remained absolutely calm, reminded me that she was going to have a home birth. So I waved the midwife and got LeAnna settled in our upstairs bedroom. The midwife arrived and made me wait outside. Pretty near wore a hole in the carpet on the landing, I paced so much. Thirteen hours- LeAnna’s longest labour. Bryan Jr and Lissa looked after their younger siblings, whilst worrying about their mamma and the new baby. It was about 3:00 in the morning when I heard the LeAnna’s screaming and the midwife’s coaxing replaced with the crying of a little pair of lungs. The midwife came out a moment later with a bright smile. In her arms was our little bundle of joy, all wrapped up in a pink blanket. I held onto that baby like there was no tomorrow. My sweet little Kaylee.

I’ll never forget the day she fixed her first mechanised device.

At 4 years old she was so inquisitive. Always poking about the shed for something to play with. One day she found an old broken cuckoo clock- or ‘birdie clock’ as she called it. She spent hours out there with that clock. Around nap time LeAnna got concerned, and went out looking for her baby. She found Kaylee sleeping on the dirty floor in the shed, with that gorramn birdie clock next to her. And it was ticking away like it hadn’t for ten years. She was so proud. When she showed me, the first words out o

Comments
Friday, 08 April 2005 16:44
Please review, even if you hated it. Another one of those late night stories of mine.

no power in the verse
xoxox-fredikayllow-xoxox
Friday, 08 April 2005 16:50
*sob* So sad.
Loved the images though. I can so see Kaylee going down to the docks looking for a fling and a chance to see a new ship.
Friday, 08 April 2005 17:17
So I guess she died when Dobson shot her. Wow, that was good.

- Soul
Friday, 08 April 2005 18:38
Well, that was downright depressing, but in a good way. Very sad.
Friday, 08 April 2005 18:56
I dearly love the results of a "what if" and this is one of the best I've seen. Had she died--heaven forbid--this would have been an FABULOUS epitaph.

That was beautifully written--like a song.

Well done!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 08 April 2005 20:59
Wow, that was incredible. Sure it was incredibly sad, but wow... I am so impressed with your "late night" writing capabilities. This was packed with the perfect amount of emotion. Great, wonderful, incredible job! =o)
Friday, 08 April 2005 21:02
Okay, the above is from me, KaySky. I don't know what happened. I guess my login feels like being anonymous today.
Friday, 08 April 2005 22:25
So very sad but oh so shiny! It was just such a perfect voice for her father and if she had died like that I could see this being a nail on the head reaction. Absolutely terrific, can't wait to see what you write next. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 09 April 2005 02:44
Holy crap!... that was amazing. Ubbersad, but amazing nonetheless! I just hope you're not going to write death scenes for all the characters. That would be just too sad!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 09 April 2005 07:13
beautifully written....so very sad!!
Saturday, 09 April 2005 10:49
Wow, this is like the best reaction i've ever got for a story. thanx everyone. i thought for sure this story was going to be flop.

no power in the verse
xoxox-fredikayllow-xoxox
Saturday, 04 June 2005 07:14
all I can say is wow, sad but wow.
BELLONA
Saturday, 03 September 2005 20:43
i'm sorery if my tyoopins a little off here but i can't actualyy see proeply because i'm crying so much

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