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Honest Run: Detail

Tuesday, February 22, 2005

What is it with Jayne anyway?

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Previous chapters include:

Honest Run: Detachment

Honest Run: Diagnosis

Honest Run: Dance

Honest Run: Dignity

Honest Run



“What’s cooking, Preacher?” Jayne came around the corner sniffing as he walked down the stairs and into the crew’s mess. River was sitting on the counter watching the older man as he cooked on the range, “How’s the ‘Verse, crazy girl?”

There was a sigh from Book.

River smiled at him, a curious little movement in her neck that contorted it somewhat, “How did the lesson go?”

Jayne screwed up his face, “How’d you know about that?”

“Girl talk.” River replied. No lengthy diatribes or fun facts. Simple. To the point.

Something that the mercenary noticed almost immediately, “What’s wrong with you?” Jayne asked, “You’re actin’ all normal.”

“It’s all just an act,” she extended her arm towards the ceiling artfully rotating her wrist, “Would you care for a performance?” River asked.

“A performance?” Jayne echoed, “Huh? Is she acting now?”

Book interrupted, “Not now, River,” he moved a pot from one burner to another, “Too much rosemary?”

“Crazy still, I guess,” Jayne sniffed, “Smells fine to me,” he came over to the shepherd, looking inside the pot, “’Cause you know I ain’t picky. Smells like stew to me.”

“As long as you don’t look at it,” The shepherd replied, “You might be convinced. I hope the captain supply stops a little sooner than later.”

The mercenary opened a few more cabinets around them, “Nah,” he said after inspecting them, “We still have a least a months worth I reckon,” he caught River staring at him out of the corner of his eye, “We’ve been between jobs befor

Comments
Tuesday, 22 February 2005 08:28
It's short. But I realized that I've got an idea or two that needed a little spacing for the rest of the crew's side story...
And for all the River and Book fans, I hope this brings us a little closer.

Enjoy,

Keep flyin'
Tuesday, 22 February 2005 12:09
Hmmm, *oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive*. Looking forward to the next part. I loved the way River was sparring mentally with Book and his admission that when she did that he lost the argument. Can't help but see River's last words though as a warning, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 22 February 2005 17:39
Superb dialogue and character interaction. The end was more cryptic than I've grown accustomed to, but that's just me.
JAZMYN
Friday, 04 March 2005 09:46
i love it is so kool you have to write more its fantastic
jazz
JAZMYN
Friday, 04 March 2005 09:54
i love it is so kool you have to write more its fantastic
jazz
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 March 2005 07:07
Hooked. Completely. Absolutely. In love. The entire thing is very, very in charecter, with the exception of a few slips in Wash- I think you make him a bit more bluntly cruel than he's shown on the show. But aside from that everything's perfect. The Simon bits are my favorites, but Jayne's right up there. I love how he's afraid River will kill him with her brain- Ha! I can't wait for the next update in this story which seems to simply get better with each chapter.

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