Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Risk Anything

Monday, February 14, 2005

Simon and Jayne have a bit of a common ground.

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Simon was unsurprisingly in the infirmary. He shuffled though papers trying to find the most recent chart he had made for River. A shuffling sound and a deep clearing of the throat caught his attention. Simon spun around to see Jayne in the doorway.

"Yes?" Simon raised an eyebrow and scanned the large man for blood.

"I, uh, wanted ta say somethin'." Jayne's uncomfortable demeanor showed.

Simon placed the papers on the counter. "Go ahead."

Jayne looked at the floor then back up at the young doctor. "I feel ya now."

Simon knitted his eyebrows together, "Feel me?"

"Yeah," Jayne nibbled on his thumbnail. "I guess I know how it is for ya now. And 'm sorry ya don't have family ta help."

Simon's face softened. "Thank you, Jayne. You are very lucky to have a good family. She'll be just fine."

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-One week earlier-

"Now you're sure you want to be the one to go in there?" Mal had a look of genuine worry he didn't usually direct towards the mercenary.

Jayne straitened his jacket sleeves. "Yeah, it's gotta be me. I'm the only one who knows what she looks like. If'n more'n one of us goes in, he'll get suspicious. Men don't take a posse to buy a slave."

Mal grunted his agreement and handed Jayne his hat. "What gun are you taken'?"

"Vera's gonna hafta sit this'n out. I need somethin' little." He slipped a simple revolver inside his jacket and walked towards the air lock. "Tell Wash ta keep it runnin'. This won't take long."

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"Now what kind of, er, helper were you looking for, Mister . . . ."

"Lee."

"Mr. Lee."

The man walking beside Jayne disgusted him. It took every ounce of strength he had not to reach out and crush the man's scrawny throat. However, Jayne knew that harming the piece of go se now might keep him from finding her. He, instead, calmly walked beside him towards the barn.

"I'm, um, . . . .well, I was thinkin' a girl."

The man nodded his head and smirked knowingl

Comments
Monday, 14 February 2005 03:14
Very well done. I loved this >> Mal rubbed his temples, "How was your day, Zoe?" Zoe smiled closed lipped, "Just fine, sir. And yours?" "Good. Thanks for askin'." Mal lowered his hands to the table, "Why can't we all have conversations like that over dinner?"<< Very cute. =o)

Monday, 14 February 2005 03:15
Thanks, KaySky! You're too sweet!
Monday, 14 February 2005 04:26
>>>"Mom wants her home." Jane grunted. "When she wrote to say Bobbie was taken she said to bring her right home. She wants to take care of her.<<<

Good son, good brother...Jayne Cobb...? It's a new direction but interesting! Thanks for adding it!
Monday, 14 February 2005 06:44
That was so beautiful. It revealed an under explored aspect of Jayne's personality. I almost found myself tearing up at certain parts. I really love the way you wrapp around and end with a scene two weeks earlier. Amazing work! I can't wait to see what you post next.
Monday, 14 February 2005 12:25
A nice bit of revelation for Jayne which I really liked. All the crew dialogue was shiny and I could see Jayne not offering the information about his family because no one had asked. Kind of had a poignancy to it. He is just the hired muscle so why would anyone want to know about his past? Yet they are more in tune to him that he thinks. Shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
MAR
Monday, 14 February 2005 14:54
Gorram shinny!!!

I liked the way it developes, it's short yet gets to the point and leaves you with a sweet feel.

I love the begining, but as KaySky said, the line between Mal and Zoe in the mess was hilarious!
Monday, 14 February 2005 20:41
I agree with the consensus about that line between Mal and Zoe at dinner. Hi-larious! It's great to see a side of Jayne other than the selfish brute that we've all come to love!

- Soul
Sunday, 03 July 2005 02:49
Damn girl, you can write!
Props to you!

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