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Worth his While

Wednesday, January 25, 2006

Started as an adventure, but ended in a way for me to screw with my favorite easy mark.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3263    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N:

Like I said, this one ran away from me. It was going to be a cool adventure, but ended up with me being mean to poor Simon. I love constructive crit. So load me up . . .oh, and while you're in a reading mood, check out my other stuff.

on with the show!!!!

"Simon . . ." The whisper jolted him awake. He almost shot straight up, only a small hand on his chest held him down. The hand's mate quickly covered his mouth. "Shhhhh." River whispered. "You'll wake Kaylee."

Simon's eyes adjusted and he saw River leaning over his bed. She motioned for him to follow her as she tiptoed out of the passenger dorms. Simon slowly rose from his bed careful not to disturb Kaylee. He slipped out of his room and met with River in the mess.

"What is it?" Simon rubbed his hand over his face trying to wake fully.

"It's Ben."

Simon's eyes flew open wide. He was awake now.

"Ben?! What's wrong?"

"They're holding him. Waiting for us."

"How do you know this?"

Simon's stupid question was rewarded with one of River's "you're a boob" looks.

"Right . . ." Simon ran his now shaking hands through his black hair. "We've got to get him out of there. But we can't by ourselves."

"I can. All by myself." River straightened her spine to make herself a bit taller. A defiant look shot across her face.

"River, I think the captain would notice if you just happened take the ship to Artemis." Simon rubbed his temples.

"He can come too - if he wants."

"If you take Serenity, we're all going."

"Good." River shot both fists into the air. "Bring in the calvary."

Simon sighed. "Don't we always."

The next day, Simon had the crew surrounding the mess table. Mal was standing over River with both of his hands flat on the table. "What the gorram hell do you mean we're already on our way?!"

River looked at her fingernails and displayed an air of boredom. She rolled her eyes and took her sweet time returning Mal's glare.

"Did I stutter?"

Mal turned beet red, "Why you . . I oughta."

Simon stepped between the two. His han

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 04:38
Heh. Simon does make himself an easy target, doesn't he?
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 04:38
Bwahaha. That was funny. More Kaylee and Simon in bed would have been good....but i realize this story wasn't about them. I simplyhave a one track mind :)
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 09:00
I agree on more Simon and Kaylee in bed, but seriously, LOVE the play on Simon :P I knew it was innocent the whole time, but it's always fun to "watch" Simon's reactions.... lol
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 12:47
LOL; Simon with a dirty mind. I love that. Funniest thing I've read in a while!
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 15:08
LOL
I Love it- I totally knew it wouldn't be sinister (that part should come later tho, I love Rayne fic)

And the way you have Simon acting as childish River- excellent!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 26 January 2006 05:04
I figured it had to be innocent. But poor Simon, the boob, such an easy mark. I agree, he is so much fun to torment!
Tuesday, 07 February 2006 10:31
"He though we were having sex." River shrugged.
"Oh" said Jayne "Dirty mind."
right there. that is why i love fic writers.

b
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 16 March 2006 19:46
Sure, it's funny... but you should consider moving the gag bit to the end of the longer action-adventure thang you had going there... Good setup -- great dramatic situation possibilities with River & Simon going in, getting stranded somehow -- Jayne gets captured & River has to save him -- take on the ol' "Tell us again how Jayne gets knocked out by a 90-lb, girl." Anyhow, mei shemma... just my 2-cents.
keep up the good words.

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