Back Stories Book 3, Chapter 25
Monday, March 17, 2014
Zoë nodded. “I’ll bet there’s a little committee of suits back there trying to figure out how best to lie.”     
“Or how to tell some horrible truth,” Inara replied softly.     
“Or how to make the most effective use of medical waste incendiaries to get rid of our bodies,” Wash chimed in.
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Title: Back Stories III, Chapter 25
Author: mal4prez
Summary: Zoë, Wash, and Inara wage war against the soft underbelly of the Alliance.
Chapter 25.
It belongs to Joss and all those business people. I'm just playing.
Many thanks to desertgirl for the beta read. And many more thanks to the readers who have left reviews or sent me notes encouraging me to get going with the updates, even after years have passed. Yeah, sorry about that!
Really I owe 1000 sorry’s for the delay. I hope you know how it is. I’m not going to attempt any guess as to when the next chapter will be done. As always, I’ll try my best, which may not be very good… but I will try!
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, , , BS Book II, BS Book III, Chapter 1. Timing, pairings, and canon blurbs are in my .
For lack of better options, the remaining crew of Serenity—a mere three people—followed the advice of the Lieutenant who’d taken Mal. Armed with nothing but a sheaf of papers covered in incomprehensibly tiny fonts of legal
There's a bit of "and then there were three...and then there were two" about this. Who will be the last one left? (I have a guess.)
I'm glad you had a bit more of Trevor Marone and Ellen Rowlee. You're beginning to connect the dots of that plot thread together. Are we going to see a Rowlee and Mal scene?
Inara had a frustrating time of it. I'm wondering if her guide was guilelessly voluble, or if he had a mission to prevent her from getting any of her questions answered.
The Colonel has put her in a tight spot, but I would like to see her be able to turn things around somehow. The conversation was somewhat enlightening, but you still have kept much hidden.
I am concerned about the arrival of Chancellor Westfield on Oeneus. (cue Star Wars Imperial March theme music)
I am much concerned about the crew members you have left in the cave for...heh...a couple years now. ;-^) Not to mention you've left Mal strapped to an examination table for nearly as long, eh? (Excuse me. What I mean is, oh please oh please oh please will you include a scene set in the cave soon, and another scene with Mal? *sad puppy eyes*)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
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