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Back Stories III, Chapter 19

Saturday, October 9, 2010

The trials and tribulations of an older, wiser River Tam.

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Saturday, 09 October 2010 02:52
I give up on trying to work out a posting schedule. To be fair: my beta had some apt criticisms of this chapter that needed to be addressed, and it wasn't easy. I'm not sure if I've satisfied her, but it surely is a better chapter because of her comments.

Never fear, the return to Mal and Inara is nigh. Um... when next I post. Which may be some time. I'll do my best.
Saturday, 09 October 2010 03:16
Hmm, my first thought when I read that Serenity was gone and the fuel tanks were exploded was the same thought Kaylee had. Only with an extra: the Reavers didn't blow the fuel. Zoe, and Wash probably did.

But we'll see if I can be right again. I've had my sneaking suspicions that something might be wrong with this Reaver raid, something Alliance going on here. Interesting they're burning the town... Destroying the evidence.

I almost expect we'll see Zoe and Wash on Serenity, and Mal and Inara in Alliance custody. Back under the drugs.
Saturday, 09 October 2010 13:35
Loved the insight into River's thoughts and her friend. Your vision of the cave was conjuring many images for me of never wanting to go to a cave again. Loved Jayne dealing with his crisis - he's a man of action - even if it's frequently the wrong action. Of course I can't believe you blew up Serenity. You didn't blow up Serenity, right? But what happened to the rest of the crew is quite a guess when dealing with your imagination and plot twists. Glad to see more of this so soon, and will semi patiently wait for the next chapter.
Saturday, 09 October 2010 15:31
Hmm, unless I misinterpreted that. Hasty reading makes sketchy comprehension.

Ratcheting up the tension though. :)
Tuesday, 12 October 2010 07:01
Interesting, kinda thought the boy was all in her mind.

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