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Red Run 16

Sunday, December 20, 2009

After the events of Serenity, the crew struggles on

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Red Run 16

Ita Moon

The second message was from Beck. It requested Mal call him ASAP. Mal keyed in the wave link to Beck’s ship casually. Itan authorities didn’t seem too focused on Serenity as a cause of their local trouble, thanks to young Kyle, and no surface flights appeared to be leaving Ita City on an intercept course for Serenity, and no shuttles or other craft were directionally headed toward them from Ita Processing station or the surrounding sky, so Mal figured a few minutes of “bon mot” chat…with as little “bon” as possible…with an ex-adversary-now-desperate-for-Mal’s-good-grace would be food for his soul. In a twisting the knife, pouring salt on a wound kinda way.

Beck sighed, most likely with relief at a saved deal, upon seeing Mal‘s face on the vid screen. “Reynolds…we noticed a couple of shuttles returning to your boat…and there’s some trouble down on Ita Moon,…you folks wouldn’t need any assistance would you?” Beck’s transmission, if intercepted, wouldn’t have implicated Mal, and on the face of it seemed innocuous enough, but reading between the lines got to be second nature when tradin’ and livin’ in the Black. Beck guarding his interest ranked higher than humanic philanthropy as a motive for the “courtesy call“ with a request for a dollop of reassurance on the side implied for his and Mal‘s “deal“.

Given their past history, Mal decided crushing that reassurance was far more pleasurable than sustaining it. “That’s CAPTAIN Reynolds to you. And yeah…heap of trouble on Ita Moon. We’re pullin” out in a couple of minutes,” Mal relished the look of momentary panic on Beck’s face. Never having given a damn in the first place about what Beck had to say, Mal’s joy at crushing his hopes tasted like pure psychological gravy and biscuits…and he’d been eatin’ light on joy lately.

“We had a deal! I get to make my pitch and you listen. You agreed!” Beck’s composure, and his knuckles, were cracking under the strain.

Mal conceded this. “That’s true,” he even nodded his assent as additional end

Comments
Monday, 21 December 2009 00:07
Glad to see more of this story because it sure is a good one! It may take more time to read it and catch up on all of the details but sure am glad you stuck it out for the finish.
Monday, 21 December 2009 06:24
That's not the finish actually...lol

I think it's got another few chapters left in it. Which I may or may not be able to finish. We'll see how it goes.
Monday, 21 December 2009 06:34
Yeah actually it's been so long since *I* wrote the story that I'm not clear on the details either.
Monday, 21 December 2009 16:35
This was always one of my fav stories on the site. I gave up long ago hoping you would finish it. i am glad you are back and really hope you finish it this time and who knows maybe start another. I have really liked your take on how the crew has changed. Especially your Jayne, I thought it was the best done of showing him turn into more of a team member and part of the family in a very jayne way. Something I would expect from Joss.
Tuesday, 22 December 2009 00:08
Thank you.
Saturday, 21 August 2010 13:01
I loved this couldn't stop reading till i finished it would love to read more =)
BLADEFAX
Tuesday, 04 January 2011 04:40
Beautiful story...thought seems unfinished!
Friday, 11 March 2011 05:13
Extremely unfinished. And will probably remain so. I had about 5 or 6 further points I wanted to make.

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